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Today's studio shoot!

Postby Kris on Sat Aug 04, 2007 5:17 pm

Are we able to put a few photos in here Gary?

EDIT: That's it. I'm posting a few! Of course, no PP here! Get it right IN THE CAMERA as Gary says... Naturally they can be improved with light PP/Cropping. Thanks so much do Benadicta! she's fantastic!

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Postby Alpha_7 on Sat Aug 04, 2007 5:18 pm

I can't wait to see them.
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Postby michael_ on Sat Aug 04, 2007 5:21 pm

already home kris? finished early?

i had a great time not only meeting everyone but learning stuff which i thought was a little scary, i cant wait to order the same gear now ;)
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Postby Kris on Sat Aug 04, 2007 5:23 pm

Indeed! :) Finished at 3, I couldnt wait to go home and see the results! It was great to meet everyone and thanks so much to everyone involved. These days are very very rewarding
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Postby Sandy Feet on Sat Aug 04, 2007 5:38 pm

What a fantastic day, thanks to everyone involved in the setting up/organisation.

Here is a quicky, minimal PP

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Postby Geoff on Sat Aug 04, 2007 5:43 pm

Bloody fantastic day! Thanks to Gary and the wonderful Benedicta, who is now attending the dinner tonight :) here's a few of my first ones...

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Postby michael_ on Sat Aug 04, 2007 5:47 pm

Geoff say thanks to your wife?fiancee? for encouraging you to pick up another women ;P Benedicta was so photogenic i hope she comes to another session or i atleast get to shoot her again sometime.
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Postby Kris on Sat Aug 04, 2007 5:54 pm

Benedicta was fun, confident and very easy going - it was a joy to photograph her!
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Postby dviv on Sat Aug 04, 2007 5:55 pm

Couple more: (sharpen only - no other PP)

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Postby Geoff on Sat Aug 04, 2007 6:09 pm

Here's yet another one (this will be the Benedica thread me thinks)...of her taken with a non conventional portrait lens (Gary's 10-20 SIGMA)..I quite liked the angle and slight distortion. Thoughts?

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Postby Kris on Sat Aug 04, 2007 6:15 pm

Distortion Geoff? naaa you can barely notice it :P
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Postby Yi-P on Sat Aug 04, 2007 6:20 pm

Argh, I think I missed out A LOT today!!! :oops: :oops:

These are very very good results, keep on it guys! :D
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Postby Kris on Sat Aug 04, 2007 6:34 pm

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Postby sirhc55 on Sat Aug 04, 2007 7:14 pm

Kris - #2 and #4 - just perfect

Sandy Feet - beautiful eye contact

Geoff - #1 - great pose but would have liked eye contact

Dviv - #1 - just perfect

Geoff - 10-20mm shot = Oh! No!
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Postby Kyle on Sat Aug 04, 2007 7:19 pm

WOW!

I had a ball, I learnt so much valuable information. Thankyou to gary for the lesson, thanks to Geoff for organizing benedica to come along, What an amazing day it's been :!: :!: :)

Here are a couple of my faves from the day

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Postby Geoff on Sat Aug 04, 2007 7:31 pm

Kyle - wow mate! 2 and 3 are outstanding.
I'm bringing a few A4 prints to give to Benedicta tonight :)
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Postby Kyle on Sat Aug 04, 2007 7:35 pm

Thanks geoff, that means a lot coming from someone with your talent :)

If you want one of them to print for her sing out on msn and i'll jet one through :up:
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Postby Six on Sat Aug 04, 2007 7:37 pm

Here is my fav for the day:

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The rest of my shots are here: http://six.imagineant.com/v/portrait/ - let me know what you think.

Was a fantastic day - I had a lot of fun and learnt a great deal. Thanks Gary, Geoff and of course Benedicta.

If any of your shots of me turned out well - I'd really like it if you could email them to me :) ssixer-at-gmail.com or send me a link :D

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Postby Kris on Sat Aug 04, 2007 7:48 pm

Six wrote:Here is my fav for the day:

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The rest of my shots are here: http://six.imagineant.com/v/portrait/ - let me know what you think.

Was a fantastic day - I had a lot of fun and learnt a great deal. Thanks Gary, Geoff and of course Benedicta.

If any of your shots of me turned out well - I'd really like it if you could email them to me :) ssixer-at-gmail.com or send me a link :D

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Fantastic Six! Great color in there - have you processed this at all? sharp, detailed, colorful. I love it
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Postby Six on Sat Aug 04, 2007 8:03 pm

Kris wrote:Fantastic Six! Great color in there - have you processed this at all? sharp, detailed, colorful. I love it


Thanks :)

All I did was a slight WB adjust and a very minimal usm after resize.
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Postby marcotrov on Sun Aug 05, 2007 10:24 am

#1 #2 and #4 are great Kris. Exposure and sharpness are spot on.
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Postby Kris on Sun Aug 05, 2007 1:10 pm

Thanks marco! #3 makes me laugh!
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Postby Reschsmooth on Sun Aug 05, 2007 2:59 pm

Here are mine from what was a fantastic day - Gary's education was invaluable, and we were truly lucky to have Benedicta as a patient and beautiful model. It was also good to meet new faces.

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And this one being an attempt at Gary's suggested multiple exposure.

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Postby Geoff on Sun Aug 05, 2007 3:01 pm

Nice ones Pat! U're getting better every time u post :)
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Postby Reschsmooth on Sun Aug 05, 2007 4:24 pm

Thanks Geoff - I think everyone took amazing photos yesterday - it helps having a model like Benedicta and a teacher like Gary.

Here's a B&W conversion

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Postby daniel_r on Sun Aug 05, 2007 6:13 pm

Looks like the portraiture workshop produced some really great results!

Great work all!
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Aug 05, 2007 6:32 pm

Rather than single any one out I just want to say there are great images here from all who've posted which I guess shows the strength of the day and the beauty of the model (and perhaps some talented photographers too :wink: )

Edit: Damn you Kris. I keep going back and looking at your second shot. There is something wonderful about the composition and your expsoure etc that really make that image a sublime photo. So I've just done what I said I wouldn't do!
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Postby Kris on Sun Aug 05, 2007 6:56 pm

hahaha Peter!! :)

Thank you so much for your comments! My first attempt so your comments mean alot to me!
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Postby Poon on Sun Aug 05, 2007 9:28 pm

Very nice. Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Postby seeto.centric on Sun Aug 05, 2007 11:39 pm

BAH! i missed out on so much :(
excellent work guys! keep rubbing it in lol

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Postby Geoff on Mon Aug 06, 2007 12:43 am

Ok...Don't want to over do the lovely Benedicta (is it possible??)..but here's a couple more from me:

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