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Blood Red Orange - Eclipse Images

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Tue Aug 28, 2007 9:59 pm

Here is my take on tonight.thanks for looking:D

Taken with my 400mm 2.8 Nikkor

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Postby Yi-P on Tue Aug 28, 2007 10:02 pm

Great series!! I love them! :D
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Postby losfp on Tue Aug 28, 2007 10:06 pm

Good one Dan!!!

I only thought about doing a squence after the fact, so mine were really hard to line up, and I gave up ;)

Very cool sequence. Probably the only thing I would do is to colour correct the 2nd shot so that it matches the other moons in the bottom left, otherwise perfect :)
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Postby Pehpsi on Tue Aug 28, 2007 10:07 pm

Shit yeah! Top work...
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Postby ozczecho on Tue Aug 28, 2007 10:29 pm

Mate...awesome...this works....
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Postby jethro on Tue Aug 28, 2007 10:46 pm

Great stuff Dan. Epitomises the event!
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Postby BT*ist on Tue Aug 28, 2007 10:47 pm

Brilliant sequence... though I'll admit I'm a little peeved that every single one of the component moons you took looks better than any single shot I took tonight. Oh, well. :D
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Postby NJ on Tue Aug 28, 2007 10:47 pm

bloody awesome! looks like u had a nice clear night, i wasnt so lucky.
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Tue Aug 28, 2007 10:49 pm

Thanks guys, i took out my 'hardly' used 400 mm cleaned it up and wow, its still one of my sharpest lenses, i am going to do some day shooting with it, the backgrounds on 2.8 look amazing!!

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Postby blacknstormy on Tue Aug 28, 2007 10:51 pm

What a fantastic series :)
And how cool was that moon- looked at the sky more than I looked at the ball at tennis .... at least it gave me an excuse for my shitty tennis ;)
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Postby Chad on Tue Aug 28, 2007 10:55 pm

Very well done :D
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Postby chrisk on Tue Aug 28, 2007 10:58 pm

one of the best eclipse series' i have seen. great work.

when you switch to canon, we need to talk about that lens. :lol:
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Tue Aug 28, 2007 11:01 pm

Rooz wrote:one of the best eclipse series' i have seen. great work.

when you switch to canon, we need to talk about that lens. :lol:


Lol i am a turncoat....staying put now with the new bodies....cant wait to whack that lens on a D3 with 3200 ISO........lol

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Postby jethro on Tue Aug 28, 2007 11:05 pm

Dan the 300D sounds very good to me as well. Im a little dissapointed in he frame rate . But it will do for me
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Postby Matt. K on Tue Aug 28, 2007 11:07 pm

Like a string of pearls. Excellent!
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Postby norbs on Tue Aug 28, 2007 11:15 pm

Oh dear. I thought I was only ripping off NASA. :(

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Will get rid off it Dan if you object.
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Tue Aug 28, 2007 11:24 pm

 LOL did you do the same thing?

I saw this layout years ago......never had the right thing to do it with, this eclipse seemed perfect...whats the reference to NASA mean? :)
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Postby norbs on Tue Aug 28, 2007 11:33 pm

Cre8tivepixels wrote:LOL did you do the same thing?

I saw this layout years ago......never had the right thing to do it with, this eclipse seemed perfect...whats the reference to NASA mean? :)


I saw a similar pic on NASA today at some stage researching where it would be best to take the photos from.

As it turned out, not where there were 20 other people with PnS cameras firing flashes like cracker night.
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Postby Big V on Wed Aug 29, 2007 12:07 am

Both of you have done a good job both with the images and the display of the sequence - but if I may offer some advice, you have placed the totally eclipsed moon at the end of the sequence where it should be placed before the moon came out of the eclipse.. Astronomers will notice this straight away.
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Wed Aug 29, 2007 12:55 am

Big V wrote:Both of you have done a good job both with the images and the display of the sequence - but if I may offer some advice, you have placed the totally eclipsed moon at the end of the sequence where it should be placed before the moon came out of the eclipse.. Astronomers will notice this straight away.


I didn't take the image for "astronomers' i took if for me :)
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Postby norbs on Wed Aug 29, 2007 4:27 am

Big V wrote:Both of you have done a good job both with the images and the display of the sequence - but if I may offer some advice, you have placed the totally eclipsed moon at the end of the sequence where it should be placed before the moon came out of the eclipse.. Astronomers will notice this straight away.


I was bored 20 minutes into it. I wasnt standing around for another 80 minutes to get the full cycle. :)
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Postby Willy wombat on Wed Aug 29, 2007 8:42 am

great series Dan - very good
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Postby Rainey on Wed Aug 29, 2007 12:52 pm

Terrific! Absolutely spot on.
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Postby Killakoala on Wed Aug 29, 2007 1:19 pm

Fantastic work fellas.
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Postby Travy on Wed Aug 29, 2007 1:21 pm

love the series.

well done!!
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