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Postby big pix on Thu Sep 20, 2007 12:51 pm

....... just take off....... this fellow was a bit shy, he has lost some feathers on the upper part of the chest area, a lot of Red Wattle birds around here and they tend to pick on the Lorries.......

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Postby Reschsmooth on Thu Sep 20, 2007 12:56 pm

The area of sharp focus seems to be slightly in front of the bird and the bird itself looks a little soft.

Nice capture, despite this.
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Postby big pix on Thu Sep 20, 2007 1:04 pm

Reschsmooth wrote:The area of sharp focus seems to be slightly in front of the bird and the bird itself looks a little soft.

Nice capture, despite this.


the area is directly under the bird and on the same plane as his eye, the angle the shot was taken at is a tad misleading........ shooting wide open with a 1.4tc at 420mm yes he is a little soft in the body
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Postby Reschsmooth on Thu Sep 20, 2007 1:07 pm

my monitor doesn't help either.
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Postby radar on Thu Sep 20, 2007 1:20 pm

Very nice capture Bernie, the lori is very nicely positioned in the shot. It is just a tad soft but you did extremely well to handhold at the shutter speed used. A bit of a higher ISO would have served you well here withouth affecting quality no the D2Xs.

Very nice soft background as well.

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Postby big pix on Thu Sep 20, 2007 1:36 pm

radar wrote:Very nice capture Bernie, the lori is very nicely positioned in the shot. It is just a tad soft but you did extremely well to handhold at the shutter speed used. A bit of a higher ISO would have served you well here without affecting quality no the D2Xs.

Very nice soft background as well.

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shot at 400iso and this is about 60% of the original image..... I am finding that the 120-300 2.8 Sigma is not very forgiven with DOF when shooting wide open...... stopped down 1 1/2 to 2 stops it is fantastic but not always possible. The Bigma gives slightly better results with only stopped down half a stop, but with all new Len's there is a learning curve and I have shot very little with this new 2.8 Sigma, but will fix that next week on location......... after my weight lifting sessions so I can hand hold this beast longer than 2 minutes

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Postby Killakoala on Thu Sep 20, 2007 2:15 pm

As a portrait of a bird, the angle and looks of the bird is excellent. The colourful foliage also enhances the image. Nice work.
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