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by Raskill on Sun Oct 14, 2007 11:45 pm
Hi all,
As I now have broadband again, I have been uploading shots from a few rounds of racing I've attended.
These shots from are from Oran Park.
C&C asked for, welcomed and appreciated.
Rick Kelly leads Jamie Whincup through the back section of Oran Park.
Rick Kelly flying onto the pit straight of Oran Park. (dustbunnies and all).
Todd Kelly brakes to avoid running into the back end of another slow Falcon.... (yes, I know they won at Bathurst....)
Apologies for the black borders, the images are used elsewhere also.
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by BBJ on Mon Oct 15, 2007 12:31 am
Hi Alan, good shots mate and i am getting to be jealous as i have not been to any motorsport events lately not even my Moto GP this year as work and leaving it too late to get organised but maybe next year so good to see some action with these pics.
Cheers
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by MCWB on Mon Oct 15, 2007 12:38 am
Alan,
#1-Awesome, action packed! Too much foreground though I think, I'd like to see the cars more central. Maybe give it a kick of contrast too?
#2-I see this sort of image published all the time in major motorsport publications and general media; I can never understand why. It just seems like blurry rubbish to me. But if people are happy to publish it...
#3-Great! To be critical the bonnet is a bit blown, might need a bump of contrast, and shame about the DJR car but not much you can do. Well panned, and great flame.
Edit: jeez I seem critical...  Hmm, don't take these the wrong way Alan, I reckon #1 and #3 are great images, in fact I'm sure they're all publishable. The comments are what I'd say about my own images (and I tend to be rather a perfectionist about my photos), so these may be unduly harsh.
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by bwhinnen on Mon Oct 15, 2007 8:21 am
Great work as always Alan.
1 - Agree more contrast needed in this shot, other than that I think it works well, the amount of foreground balances the amount of track behind the cars.
2 - Nicely saturated and contrasty but I think this needs a little more point of reference. It just seems to be missing something, perhaps it is because it is a Holden all on its own
3 - Superb! This is racing! Love the angle, the closeness the feel of speed, the colour the contrast! Well done Alan.
Cheers
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by michael_ on Mon Oct 15, 2007 8:57 am
shoot canon they would be perfect 
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by mrbillf on Mon Oct 15, 2007 11:50 am
It's all good Alan but, not a fan of the black borders for these pics. Sorry.
Cheers,
Bill
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by Raskill on Mon Oct 15, 2007 11:53 am
Thanks guys.
Trent, no your comments aren't harsh. I guess the appeal of #2 is it has an artsy feel to it. I have been reliably informed that CAMS likes to see these exact types of images in photographer applications. I like them also, it is harder to get this type of image with a single in focus area than panning. Maybe it's the challenge?
I have purposely left in the foreground in #1 to use DOF, the track and marbles are OOF, as is the car behind, which gives a feeling of depth. Well, I think so anyway... I may be speaking out my bum.
Agree with you Brett and Trent about getting more contrast in #1 and #3, can't believe I need more contrast....
BBJ, yes, get trackside asap!!! Your posts have been missed.
Michael, you can put your Canon where it's high ISO would be useful...
Thanks for taking the time to comment!

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by ozimax on Mon Oct 15, 2007 12:51 pm
Love all 3 , especially #2. Did anyone get some shots of the MOTO gp yesterday?
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by Raskill on Mon Oct 15, 2007 12:57 pm
mrbillf wrote:It's all good Alan but, not a fan of the black borders for these pics. Sorry.
Cheers Bill, the black borders are because I also have the watermarked and PPed for sending them to various folks for possible use, that way they can't really use them for anything other than looking at.
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by jamesw on Mon Oct 15, 2007 1:03 pm
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