A moment captured

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A moment captured

Postby chrisk on Sun Dec 23, 2007 10:15 pm

the little fella has had an ear infection, is cutting 4 teeth and has a pretty bad rash. all in all he's had a hard time. i'll never forget how sad he was when i look at this photo. :(

thats why i love this shot, it's a frozen moment in time that will live with me forever. good or bad, captured moments are priceless. sometimes it takes a shot like this to remind me why i love photography, its not always about the "perfect" shot.

b&W conversion, blue filter applied for mood, small amount of film grain added.

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Postby Bindii on Sun Dec 23, 2007 10:22 pm

Oh this is a fantastic shot... as you said it has really caught that moment in time... poor little mite... I personally can't think of anything to improve it...

cept maybe a Fuji S5pro...

or a Canon... *evil grin*

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Postby chrisk on Sun Dec 23, 2007 10:24 pm

or a Bindii lol
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Postby Bindii on Sun Dec 23, 2007 10:30 pm

Rooz wrote:or a Bindii lol


This reminds me....I needs to send more disturbing...inappropriately sexual PMs....


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Postby gstark on Sun Dec 23, 2007 11:14 pm

Bindii wrote:This reminds me....I needs to send more disturbing...inappropriately sexual PMs....


What's taking you so long?
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Postby Bindii on Sun Dec 23, 2007 11:20 pm

gstark wrote:
Bindii wrote:This reminds me....I needs to send more disturbing...inappropriately sexual PMs....


What's taking you so long?



Shush.... I started at A... *grins*

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Postby Travy on Mon Dec 24, 2007 10:08 am

great shot!

love the T-shirt too :lol:
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Postby robert on Mon Dec 24, 2007 11:08 am

what a great shot- lovely and smoothe.

What B&W conversion did you use- sorry I dont understand what you wrote.- "b&W conversion"

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Postby chrisk on Mon Dec 24, 2007 3:05 pm

sorry, thats a script error from when i copied and pasted from flickr. for the B&W i just did straight B&W conversion with captureNX and then a 10% opacity colorise overlay. there's much better ways to do it i'm sure but i don't have the time, (or know how :lol: ), to do it a better way. my PP skills suck.
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Postby Slider on Mon Dec 24, 2007 4:54 pm

The expression says it all. It's just all too much. Great shot :D
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Postby mickeyjuice on Mon Dec 24, 2007 6:20 pm

Rooz wrote:there's much better ways to do it i'm sure but i don't have the time, (or know how Laughing ), to do it a better way. my PP skills suck.

Can't see how you could improve it much, frankly, but have you had a play with Lightroom? It rocks for this sort of stuff.
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Postby ABG on Mon Dec 24, 2007 6:27 pm

Nice shot.

Bindii wrote:
gstark wrote:
What's taking you so long?



Shush.... I started at A... *grins*

:wink:


Gary, you're gunna be waiting a while. I'm wayyy higher up the list than you alphabetically speaking and I'm still waiting impatiently... :P
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Postby Matt. K on Mon Dec 24, 2007 11:34 pm

Keep an eye on that ear infection. A friend of mine lost 60% of his hearing permanently because the infection was not picked up and treated. Beautiful photograph! You won't believe what it will invoke in 30 years time.
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Postby sunnylass on Mon Dec 24, 2007 11:37 pm

ABG wrote:Nice shot.

Bindii wrote:
gstark wrote:
What's taking you so long?



Shush.... I started at A... *grins*

:wink:


Gary, you're gunna be waiting a while. I'm wayyy higher up the list than you alphabetically speaking and I'm still waiting impatiently... :P


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