C&C:"waiting for him" (Penny)

[Oz_Beachside]

Hello,
Had the pleasure of shooting with Penny today on location, and this series was shot in a quiet melbourne laneway, natural light, sunset oclock, no other gear, and I am pleased with the results.

love to know what you think and how I may improve. thanks in advance.

regards
Bruce
#1 - "on time"


#2 - "where is he"


#3 - "oh there he is!"

[chrisk]

i love your stuff. the angles, lighting and compositions are always very appealing to me. #2 is a freakin pearler. the soft glow of the lighting is sublime.
although...i must say, i dont particularly like the facial expression in #3.

[ewm3]

great composition in 1
Not sure abour 2; perhaps more contrast / saturation?
3 makes me wonder what she's thinking!
I'm not into portraits, so I can only offer 'reaction' to what I see. Enjoyed looking at them!

[Matt. K]

Bruce
She's beautiful! I just want to run my hands over her curves and caress every part of her body. The girl looks OK too!
On a serious note...these are some of the more sophisticated images you have posted and demonstrate your maturity as an evolving artist/photographer. These images would not look out of place in Vogue magazine. Nice work!

[Catcha]

1st and 3rd shot are great, love the angles....very pretty model.....

[Oz_Beachside]

thanks heaps on the great feedback, agree with the PP work required, these are almost straight from camera, so now for some levels etc.

i'll repost further edits soon.

[surenj]

On a serious note...these are some of the more sophisticated images you have posted and demonstrate your maturity as an evolving artist/photographer. These images would not look out of place in Vogue magazine. Nice work!

I would agree that sophisticated is a great word to describe these images..

[soarer]

I love the first shot, the car is soo glossy, love it, and her red dress is a great compliment to the black car. Helps to have a hot model too though

[PiroStitch]

Nice work bruce keep it up.

[methd]

good stuff bruce.

i'd like to see more light on her (only) in the first pic. Perhaps a localised light that's shielded so it won't splash on the car as well.

[pucara]

good work Bruce I like number 3 she is beauty .........

[Oz_Beachside]

i'd like to see more light on her (only) in the first pic. Perhaps a localised light that's shielded so it won't splash on the car as well.

yeah, agree, thats exactly what I was thinking at the time, but the exercise was to see what I could get with just the sun, and a camera (no reflectors etc).

[Mr Darcy]

I really like these as a sequence telling a story.
Generally with "glamour" shots, I have a quick peep and move on.

I keep coming back to this thread though as there is a real mood to them.
As such I am not really prepared to pull one out and say "that's the one" If I was was held at gun point though I would probably go with #2 as this really encapsulates the whole story for me.