I hope I get to shoot more in the future with Penny, she is a delight to work with.
#1 - oh how I love the 85mm!!!!
#2 - late arvo lighting, sun and a camera.
#3 - loved the lighting in this one..
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Love your C&C on these, thanks in advance,
I hope I get to shoot more in the future with Penny, she is a delight to work with. #1 - oh how I love the 85mm!!!! #2 - late arvo lighting, sun and a camera. #3 - loved the lighting in this one..
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Awww Spoilsport  Greg
It's easy to be good... when there is nothing else to do
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Sorry Bruce
I must have missed the email you sent me asking for me to be Penny's personal assistant for the day. DAMN!!!
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telstra bigpond ey, can't rely on them...
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the last promise for me..
 nikon 200- lenses- 18-70 / tamron 90 micro/ tokina 12-24 / sigma 70-200 / nikon 85 1.8 / SB600..
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#3 lighting is great as well as the styling on the set.
Hassy, Leica, Nikon, iPhone
Come follow the rabbit hole...
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I won't give too much feedback on these because I'm about to head out, but the one thing that sticks out is the black shirt with gold writing. I think it takes away from the images. I took a few seconds to stop and try and read the shirt, especially in the first. I like the others though. The last one is really nice!
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Bruce,
She's a gorgeous model and you have done a wonderful job in photographing her. I can't fault the photos at all. The thing that bugs me is, to me, she has overdone her makeup around her eyes. I think she could tone that back a bit as she has more than enough natural good looks.
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thanks for the kind words all, sounds like I am on the right track at improving. still poor at my focusing (might need to learn what the "fine tune" thingo is) and mastering "curves adjustment" (no pun intended).
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No adjusting needed I think... What was the set up for the low key last shot? One softbox to the left?
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bare hot lamp, similar to a regular hardware 500W halogen work light, 45 degrees left rear of model to provide the rim or accent effect. about waist height.
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