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Postby Geoff on Thu Jan 25, 2007 6:34 pm

Why? Cos I have got an understanding fiance! She said yes to the 85mm 1.4!!
What's better she even agreed (ok..reluctantly) to pose for some initial shots.

These are the first images from the camera. No PP sharpening, just curves adjustment, crop and resizing.

One happy camper here :)

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Yes...a few short hours after the purchase I still can't get the smile off my face:


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Postby Oscar on Thu Jan 25, 2007 6:42 pm

Second and third shots are great Geoff.

But you should definately delete that last one :wink: :lol:

Great addition to the family hey Geoff

Cheers, Mick :) :) :)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Thu Jan 25, 2007 6:44 pm

Congratulations Geoff, I hope you've bought Bel a new pair of shoes, or a nice Party dress to say thank you :P

Awesome photos considering there hasn't been any sharpening in post.
Yikes!
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Postby stetner on Thu Jan 25, 2007 7:28 pm

Looks like a great lens!
Oscar wrote:But you should definately delete that last one :wink: :lol:
Yep, I think that is his 'bad' side! :lol: :lol:
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Postby Onyx on Thu Jan 25, 2007 7:56 pm

The lens is friggin' fantastic - well done, and enjoy your new purchase Geoff.

The colour pics look a bit too subdued. Were these inadvertantly stiil in aRGB colorspace? PS Update your camera's user comment too - it's still got 2006 on it. ;)
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Postby Geoff on Thu Jan 25, 2007 7:59 pm

Thanks Onyx - these pics were processed on the lappie.
Colourspace is sRGB
Will fix the date too - ta :)

Here's another one, B&W:


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Postby Slider on Thu Jan 25, 2007 8:15 pm

Looks like a great purchase :D Lovely bokeh in the 3rd and 4th.
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Postby Mal on Thu Jan 25, 2007 8:19 pm

You are a lucky man :)
It is such a beautiful lens.
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Postby Kyle on Thu Jan 25, 2007 8:20 pm

One of these lenses has my name on it for sure! :D
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Postby Oscar on Thu Jan 25, 2007 8:23 pm

Love that shot in the new post Geoff. It's a nice shot of Bel and I like the treatment too!

Well done,

Cheers, Mick :) :) :)
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Postby Killakoala on Thu Jan 25, 2007 8:51 pm

You will love it Geoff.
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Postby colin_12 on Thu Jan 25, 2007 9:04 pm

your a lucy lad Geoff.
#2 for me.
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Postby stubbsy on Thu Jan 25, 2007 11:19 pm

OK Geoff I'm being quite tough on you here.

#1 is not at all flattering because of the forced distortion of the pose and the OOF right eye doesn't help.

#2 is better, but Bel looks a little awkardly posed. It doesn't look relaxed or natural somehow

#3 has a much better candid and relaxed feel to it, but the OOF right eye still lets you down a little

#4 is a good image - shows the lens off well and has great bokeh - you look overjoyed and it's a great natural image

I was about to say that the lens is obviously no good, but then I saw the one you subsequently posted of Bel. That image has ALL the qualities that the others lacked. The pose is wonderful, the image is so sharp my eyeballs are bleeding and the really piercing eyes just compel you to look at the image. Excellent.
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Postby Geoff on Thu Jan 25, 2007 11:23 pm

Peter - thanks for your honest critique.
I appreciate the brutatlity :)
I obviously have a bit to learn with this new lens - bear in mind that these were the very first images taken with the camera when it was only about 20 minutes 'young' :)
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Postby Reschsmooth on Thu Jan 25, 2007 11:23 pm

Geoff, I was going to say exactly what Peter said :lol:

Seriously, to sound repetitive, the last one you posted really shows up why the lens (which I don't have) is a great portrait lens. The last photo is one of those ones where even the subject (if, like me, doesn't like being photographed) would be happy to see.

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Postby gooseberry on Fri Jan 26, 2007 1:43 am

Congrats on the lens Geoff, I'm sure you will enjoy it very much - look forward to seeing more great images from you.
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