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Postby NJ on Sun Dec 03, 2006 7:58 pm

had my first play with the painting with light technique. i think it turned out pretty well. please lety me know what you think. thanks.

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Postby Blackspear on Sun Dec 03, 2006 8:02 pm

Superb Nathan, very nice indeed, good colour saturation of the machine.

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Postby MattyO on Sun Dec 03, 2006 8:06 pm

Wow, that did turn out really well.... how did you go about doing that!?
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Postby NJ on Sun Dec 03, 2006 8:08 pm

thanks guys :)

MattyO, i used a long exposure of 20 secs and used a torch to reflect light of the escavator so the camera could pick it up. and because of the long exposure the sky is shown quite nicely as well.
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Postby sheepie on Sun Dec 03, 2006 8:17 pm

One word: WOW!

Especially when you tell us your technique - well done, an inspiration and some great shared learning :)
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Postby MattyO on Sun Dec 03, 2006 8:38 pm

What type of torch did you use.... I suppose you need to be even with the painting of the subject or else there will be under and over exposed patches in the final result....

How did you manage to get such a good result?
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Postby adam on Sun Dec 03, 2006 8:39 pm

Very nicely lit!
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Postby gooseberry on Sun Dec 03, 2006 8:46 pm

Good stuff, the composition works well here and the exposure is just right.
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Postby NJ on Sun Dec 03, 2006 9:03 pm

sheepie wrote:One word:
Especially when you tell us your technique - well done, an inspiration and some great shared learning :)


interesting you say that sheepie, because i was only inspired to do this because of other people having used this technique and sharing how they did it on this forum! :D

MattyO, i just used a small handheld torch (one of the small ones that take 2 D batteries) and just went over the escavator in a circular motion making sure to cover it equally. hope that helps.

thanks for all your comments, very much appreciated!
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Dec 03, 2006 9:05 pm

Nicely done, a lovely exposure, well done.
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Postby johnd on Mon Dec 04, 2006 1:04 pm

I agree with everything that's been said already.
An excellent result.
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Postby Alex on Mon Dec 04, 2006 2:50 pm

That's a superb result. Love it.

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Postby NJ on Mon Dec 04, 2006 6:11 pm

thanks for the great replies guys! :D
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Postby Big V on Mon Dec 04, 2006 6:47 pm

Very effective...good colour balance.
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Postby blacknstormy on Mon Dec 04, 2006 7:02 pm

NJ - great job - and such a nice even paint with light !!! BTW - just checked your exif = was a 30 second exposure :)

Good stuff
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Postby NJ on Mon Dec 04, 2006 7:03 pm

ahaha thanks rel, i should really check my facts before blurting them out :P
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Postby seeto.centric on Thu Dec 07, 2006 4:43 pm

nice shot there and interesting technique! hmm.. now i just need to find a place to try it out!

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Postby NJ on Thu Dec 07, 2006 6:14 pm

thanks! yeh i had to pbe patient until i found an appropriate subject as well :P
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Postby Oscar on Thu Dec 07, 2006 8:43 pm

Nice work Nathan. Certainly shows great lighting and the night sky looks great too.
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Postby Matt. K on Thu Dec 07, 2006 8:44 pm

Now that's bringing your subject to life!
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Postby Slider on Thu Dec 07, 2006 9:46 pm

Nice work and a great technique :D
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Postby NJ on Thu Dec 07, 2006 10:07 pm

thanks very much guys! im blown away with all these kind comments! wasnt expecting such a responce! :D
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