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Model shoot: Angela

Postby Onyx on Mon Jan 08, 2007 9:59 pm

This time, I played around in photoshop to make it less crap. I think I got the opposite result...

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http://www.kayimages.com/2007/angie/DSC_2425.jpg
Warning: pink bits
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Postby Kyle on Mon Jan 08, 2007 10:02 pm

Love the 2nd, in b&w. nice work :)

Also, love the 5th :P
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Postby wendellt on Mon Jan 08, 2007 10:23 pm

the 2nd one is a better treatment

i would tend not to oversaturate in this sort of light

The light is much more interesting in the 4th and 5th shot


and interesting thing about her shirt

aportos chicken did a similar shirt as a cross promotional thing for models to wear

it said don't feed the models and on the back it read 'because that's our job'
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Postby mattyjacobs on Mon Jan 08, 2007 10:32 pm

umm ... she might not like the look of her armpit in the pink bits photo ... kinda looks like it could be hairy/stubbly.
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Postby Onyx on Tue Jan 09, 2007 5:57 pm

lol armpit hair... I should definitely take more notice of these things before I post em. ;)

The 'light' in the 4th and 5th Wendell was actually me playing with gaussian blur of the background/overlay layer to give a glow to the model. After reviewing all my shot images with flat lighting, I figured something different would be nice. I don't know exactly how to extract the most from her pasty white skin.
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Postby Killakoala on Tue Jan 09, 2007 9:35 pm

Number three is my pick of the bunch. The pose, the colour and the light is appealing to me. The last one is great to, but the lighting let's it down. A reflector of fill-in-flash was needed here.

Good work again Chi.
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