One of m first portraits

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One of m first portraits

Postby Kris on Fri Feb 09, 2007 6:42 am

I asked for a quick pose..

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Postby Geoff on Fri Feb 09, 2007 7:54 am

Chris, a beautiful natural pose and capture.
Good model too, helps make the image.
I'd like to see a tad more contrast in this image, but only a little bit. The bokeh is nice. The slightly blown highlights to the left and right of the woman's head as you look at the image just above her shoulders is a little distracting. All in all, a lovely portrait. Any more?
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Postby Kris on Fri Feb 09, 2007 8:26 am

Thanks, I can adjust it a bit more. When I get home ill up the contrast and remove some of the brightness out of the background

Unforunately no more, we were at a BBQ and I just snapped it with the 24-70 F2.8 attached. I was pretty happy with it but agree re: contrast/background
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Postby colin_12 on Fri Feb 09, 2007 12:50 pm

Nice Kris.
Please post the edited version when you have it.
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Postby Bindii on Fri Feb 09, 2007 1:02 pm

She does look lovely and relaxed I think you did a good job...

for future reference though maybe when you have a bright day like this one you could underexpose the shot a little (a stop or two) to expose the background correctly ....that stops the blown highlights in the background...then add some fill flash onto the subject...it works a treat..:)
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Postby Kris on Fri Feb 09, 2007 1:36 pm

Bindii, thanks for the tips. Ill play a bit more tonight with the image as I do want to print this one off.

Ill post my reattempt :)
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Postby Ladybird on Fri Feb 09, 2007 6:33 pm

For a first portrait, I think you have done exceptionally well. The photo gives a wonderfully natural and relaxed feel to it. Well done.
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Postby Slider on Fri Feb 09, 2007 9:31 pm

Nice Kris. Lovely light, composure and expression :D
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Postby Kris on Fri Feb 09, 2007 10:25 pm

thank you guys :) I really appreciate it! I do love the shot, definitely print material for me
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Postby Kris on Fri Feb 09, 2007 10:49 pm

Here is a shot with +10 contrast?

Whatcha think Geoff?

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