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One of m first portraitsModerators: Greg B, Nnnnsic, Geoff, Glen, gstark, Moderators
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One of m first portraitsI asked for a quick pose..
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Chris, a beautiful natural pose and capture.
Good model too, helps make the image. I'd like to see a tad more contrast in this image, but only a little bit. The bokeh is nice. The slightly blown highlights to the left and right of the woman's head as you look at the image just above her shoulders is a little distracting. All in all, a lovely portrait. Any more? Geoff
Special Moments Photography Nikon D700, 50mm 1.4, 85mm 1.4, 70-200 2.8VR, SB800 & some simple studio stuff.
Thanks, I can adjust it a bit more. When I get home ill up the contrast and remove some of the brightness out of the background
Unforunately no more, we were at a BBQ and I just snapped it with the 24-70 F2.8 attached. I was pretty happy with it but agree re: contrast/background 5D | 16-35L | 35L | 85L | 135L | 70-200F2.8IS | 580EX
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She does look lovely and relaxed I think you did a good job...
for future reference though maybe when you have a bright day like this one you could underexpose the shot a little (a stop or two) to expose the background correctly ....that stops the blown highlights in the background...then add some fill flash onto the subject...it works a treat.. ![]() The last thing I want to do is hurt you... but it's still on the list...
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Bindii, thanks for the tips. Ill play a bit more tonight with the image as I do want to print this one off.
Ill post my reattempt ![]() 5D | 16-35L | 35L | 85L | 135L | 70-200F2.8IS | 580EX
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Nice Kris. Lovely light, composure and expression
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Mark ![]() http://www.trekaboutphotography.com He who dies with the most lenses wins...
thank you guys
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Here is a shot with +10 contrast?
Whatcha think Geoff? ![]() 5D | 16-35L | 35L | 85L | 135L | 70-200F2.8IS | 580EX
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