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Postby camrak on Tue Sep 20, 2005 1:34 am

I would like to say 'hello' to everybody. I am quite new on this forum.
I am very happy to find Ozi based nikon photo forum
(after small sugestion from my friend krpolak - thanks for your help!).

This is my first images on this forum.
Taken with D70 & 28-70 KIT & Nikkor 70-300G .
Will be happy to receive your comments!

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1. More water ...

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2. Water tree ...

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3. White path ...
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Postby Glen on Tue Sep 20, 2005 1:45 am

Welcome Camrak, hope you like it here :D
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Postby KerryPierce on Tue Sep 20, 2005 11:16 am

Lovely scenery and good compositions. :)
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Sep 20, 2005 11:27 am

Welcome Camrak. The second image is the standout for me with the tree nice and sharp and beautifully framed by the waterfall.
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Postby Oneputt on Tue Sep 20, 2005 11:34 am

Lovely images, but for me the composition of the first makes it a standout.
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Postby MHD on Tue Sep 20, 2005 12:03 pm

Yes... I like the first one and mainly due to the great composition
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Postby agriffiths on Tue Sep 20, 2005 12:17 pm

I love the second shot. 8) Gives a great sense of movement behind something so stationary and solid. It's almost as if the tree is drawing energy from the waterfall. Where were they taken?
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Postby krpolak on Tue Sep 20, 2005 12:51 pm

Your welcome Camrac :)

I prefer third shot due to 'z' shape path created by the stream, supported by leaning rocks. Also tones and colour give an idea about how rough is this environment. Maybe touch more saturation would do. Good photos.

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Postby avkomp on Tue Sep 20, 2005 1:31 pm

Welcome camrac,

I prefer the second shot, almost silhouetted by the water behind it.

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Postby camrak on Tue Sep 20, 2005 10:26 pm

Hello again!

Thanks for warm invite. This fotos were taken in Grampians - MacKenzie Waterfalls two weeks ago.
I think this is gratification from weather because on this time everyday was raining :) And now I have some pictures of small niagara ;)
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Postby Geoff on Wed Sep 21, 2005 12:40 am

Welcome camrak, you will like it here. Great first images! The 2nd one is my personal favourite
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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Sep 21, 2005 12:51 am

Welcome Camrak - it is not often that we see new members posting pics so early and of such quality - hopefully we will see many more :D
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Postby Catcha on Wed Sep 21, 2005 1:49 am

Welcome Camrak...nice shots :D
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Postby BBJ on Wed Sep 21, 2005 7:28 am

Welcome camrac, well these are nice pictures and a great way to start off a 2nd post i am sure you will enjoy your stay and lots of reading etc...
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Postby camrak on Thu Sep 22, 2005 1:06 am

Thanks again!

I will show new images as soon as possible.
I can make a many mistakes in my posts, and I hope so - you will have patience for me becouse my English is not well.
I'm only four months in Australia, and still learning English language ;)
but photography too :) ... I think, everybody lerning photography along our life.

One foto more for the end this topic:

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Jurassic park? ;)
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