Intermediate Egret and Cattle Egret

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Intermediate Egret and Cattle Egret

Postby marcotrov on Wed Nov 09, 2005 12:28 am

Some more images taken in a swamp outside Brisbane on the weekend. Some areas of blown highlights but the harsh light of around 2:30pm made lighting difficult :( but did manage to get some nice backlit shots with the help of a little SB800 Fill flash.
Oh what I would have given for a better beamer on the day. Must get a hold of one. :( Get ready Birdy! :wink:
3 Intermediate Egrets moments before their procreation impulses grabbed them. http://www.dslrusers.net/viewtopic.php?p=133490#133490
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The Intermediate Egret Portrait with nice backlighting. I like this one eventhough it could have paid me the courtesy of strtching its neck out a little more and looking at me rather than glancing :roll:

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Postby marcotrov on Wed Nov 09, 2005 7:45 am

Well whoopi doo get message from Quantas after they lost my tripod saying they haven't found it yet but are still looking. How bloody hard could it be!! :evil:
Any critique on the photos would be appreciated.
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Postby blacknstormy on Wed Nov 09, 2005 12:41 pm

Marco - I really like these shots. I've never seen them with such a brilliant green tinge around the eye before - breeding colours... beautiful.
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Postby Hlop on Wed Nov 09, 2005 1:15 pm

Can not say anything critical about them - I like them all. Second photo might be a bit better if you crop it tighter but I'm not sure about it
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Postby marcotrov on Wed Nov 09, 2005 2:36 pm

Thanks for the kind remarks. It was my first attempt at these birds. Their rookery was a great place to have close by, as long as you could bear the mossies and smell. :lol: It was only 10 mins from where i was staying in Brisbane. :wink:
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Postby wendellt on Wed Nov 09, 2005 3:08 pm

they are all elegantly captured, excellent work, i think you could use the same skills in glamour photography
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Postby dooda on Wed Nov 09, 2005 3:38 pm

After staring at your frames for a few minutes, I finally got around to checking out the birds. Very nice. The frames are a little too much though. Of course that's my own opinion.
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Postby marcotrov on Wed Nov 09, 2005 3:45 pm

Thank you wendell. You are too kind master! :oops: :) Yeah wendell I could set up my tripod and hide at the end of the catwalk :lol:
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Postby Slider on Wed Nov 09, 2005 7:18 pm

Very nice. The 3rd one with fill in is great. Love the green tinge around the eyes. :D
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Postby marcotrov on Wed Nov 09, 2005 8:00 pm

Dave I wanted to try the frame action I got from Kevin here at DSLR users. Great action even if it may be less than appropriate for the subject it cradles.
Thank slider I was happy with the SB800 fill flash settings I used. Will know what to do next time if there is a next time. :)
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