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by elffinarts on Tue Dec 06, 2005 10:56 pm
Last Thursday's storms pics at last
this was taken from my place in Albion facing east towards the Brisbane Airport at about 3am.
http://www.photo.elffinarts.com/main.ph ... alNumber=2
sorry for the lack of thumbs, the gallery software I am using this time really locks the images well to avoid bandwidth leeching. Kinda messed with the background code to find a way to access the folder via the browser but the software returned the modes. mode of a file. There are three modes a file can have turned on or off: read ability, write ability, and execute ability. Each mode can be set for either the owner, the members of the owner's group, or all users."> mode of a file. There are three modes a file can have turned on or off: read ability, write ability, and execute ability. Each mode can be set for either the owner, the members of the owner's group, or all users.">CHMOD is an abbreviation for CHange MODe.">CHMOD to secure automatically.
Make NIKON CORPORATION
Model NIKON D70
Aperture Value f/7.1
Color Space sRGB
Exposure Bias Value 0.67 EV
Exposure Program Manual
Flash No Flash
Focal Length 29.00 mm
ISO 200
Metering Mode Multi-Segment
Shutter Speed Value 691493/23064 sec
Date/Time 12/01/2005 03:13:07
Orientation Normal (O deg)
Resolution Unit Inch
X Resolution 500 Y Resolution 500
Compression Jpeg Compression
Contrast 0
Exposure Mode 1
Saturation 0
Sharpness 0
Exif Image Height 1000 pixels
Exif Image Width 1200 pixels
White Balance 0
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by Willy wombat on Tue Dec 06, 2005 11:19 pm
Hi Mark - that is an amazing image. Well done - the lightning is so crisp.
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by Slider on Tue Dec 06, 2005 11:30 pm
One word -- AWESOME 
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by marcotrov on Tue Dec 06, 2005 11:40 pm
Terrific capture Mark. Glorious image. Frame this one!
cheers
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by cc@t on Wed Dec 07, 2005 12:22 am
Excellent shot Mark - but what are you doing up at 3am on a Thursday ???
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by Muzza22au on Wed Dec 07, 2005 3:42 am
Excellent photo mate!
Wish I could be so lucky to capture such beauty...
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by Killakoala on Wed Dec 07, 2005 8:16 am
There is a fairly substantial amount of the 'WOW factor' in that shot. The colours are fantastic, the lighting is 'electric.' i really like this one.
Great image.
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by Hlop on Wed Dec 07, 2005 8:41 am
Just one word - BRILLIANT!
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by MHD on Wed Dec 07, 2005 9:03 am
Oh-My-God
stunning mate, just stunning..
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by xerubus on Wed Dec 07, 2005 10:46 am
two thumbs up!!! that's a cracker... nicely done.
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by Alpha_7 on Wed Dec 07, 2005 10:58 am
Awe-inspiring stuff, the lighting, the clouds, the atmosphere... this is brilliant stuff, definitely frame it... I'd consider selling it even.
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by NJ on Wed Dec 07, 2005 12:14 pm
that truely is an absolute stella shot! i love it! 
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by antman on Wed Dec 07, 2005 1:20 pm
Excellent - picture.
Love the colours and the contrasts.
Well done. Congrats.
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by avkomp on Wed Dec 07, 2005 2:15 pm
this is an excellent image.
echo everything that has already been said about it.
Not convinced the large black frame it the best way to exhibit it though.
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by elffinarts on Wed Dec 07, 2005 4:09 pm
cc@t wrote:Excellent shot Mark - but what are you doing up at 3am on a Thursday ???
*laughs* I'm always up at 3am. I dont emerge from my darkened bedroom til at least 10am most days. This storm was just coming over Brissy as I was cleaning up before bed and rather than hit the sack I chased this storm till 7am. I have a few more shots of it at the new gallery
http://www.photo.elffinarts.com
Thanks for all the wonderful comments everyone!
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by Alpha_7 on Wed Dec 07, 2005 4:16 pm
Some great shots here Mark, well done!
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by owen on Wed Dec 07, 2005 5:16 pm
I really like the way that it has lit up the really thick dense clouds to the left. Nice photo!
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by blacknstormy on Wed Dec 07, 2005 5:21 pm
Mark, I can say but two things...
Bloody Brilliant !!!!
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by thaddeus on Wed Dec 07, 2005 9:37 pm
An arresting and dramatic shot!
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by Matt. K on Wed Dec 07, 2005 9:50 pm
Mark
A stunning photograph! What you have captured will last for ever...but the moment itself was gone in 1/10,000 of a sec. Such is the power of photography.
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by LostDingo on Wed Dec 07, 2005 9:52 pm
You have to love how sharp the lightning is but also how much it illuminated the clouds!
Great work!
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by mic on Wed Dec 07, 2005 9:55 pm
Probably the best Lightning Shot I have ever seen
Colour / Well Composed / Well exposed.
Simply amazing image that is worth getting paid for & published.
Well done Mark.
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by Neeper on Thu Dec 08, 2005 6:31 pm
Well done!!
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by pippin88 on Mon Dec 12, 2005 3:09 pm
Missed this when it was first posted.
Incredible image.
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by elffinarts on Tue Dec 13, 2005 8:29 pm
Thanks for all the great coments!
I've uploaded it as a rights managed image to fotolibra in the hope that some publisher might pay to use it. I'll update if I get any sales
Also planning to get a print made on Thursday at digilab. Cant wait to hang this on the wall at home. 
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