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In the Garden (5 img) - DialUp Warning

Postby Aussie Dave on Sun Dec 11, 2005 12:13 pm

Hi all
I was out in the garden yesterday afternoon and had the opportunity to get the camera out and take a few photos....to blow away the cobwebs building up on the D70 :lol:

All these were taken with the D70 (manual mode), Sigma 70-300 APO II (switched to macro).

EXIF: 195mm, 1/200, F29, ISO1600
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EXIF: 220mm, 1/320, F29, ISO400, SB800 (iTTL) -0.7EV
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EXIF: 195mm, 1/320, F29, ISO400, SB800 (iTTL) -0.7EV
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EXIF: 300mm, 1/320, F32, ISO400, SB800 (iTTL) -0.7EV
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EXIF: 300mm, 1/400, F10, ISO200, SB800 (iTTL) -0.7EV
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Comments/critiques welcomed...
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Postby avkomp on Sun Dec 11, 2005 12:46 pm

Like 2 3 and 5

2 would be my favourite.

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Postby mudder on Sun Dec 11, 2005 2:35 pm

G'day mate,

All these seem so sharp and detailed, really nice... Trying to offer feedback etc. so probably better off disregarding it as I have no idea what I'm doing with macro stuff, but it's good fun eh :lol:

#1, The placement of the subject relative to the background means I tend to lose the subject edges in the green background a bit

#2, Like this...

#3, I seem to be drawn to the bright part in the upper left corner

#4, This I really like, great shapes and textures...

#5, Definately my favorite from this bunch, Really like the use of DOF to keep the viewer on the interesting subject, Like this heaps...
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Postby Aussie Dave on Sun Dec 11, 2005 3:37 pm

Thanks for your feedback Andrew. I won't disregard your comments as your points are quite valid.
It is interesting that you sometimes don't see things in your image until someone points them out to you :)

Hopefully one day I can get a serious macro lens, but until then I'll have to put up with the Sigma :wink:
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Postby marcotrov on Sun Dec 11, 2005 4:02 pm

#5 is definitely my favourite with the selective focussing composition and the OOF all working in unison #3 too is a beauty. Great shots Dave.
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Dec 11, 2005 6:15 pm

Dave

#2, #3 and #5 also work best for me but #5 is the star.
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Postby Slider on Sun Dec 11, 2005 7:19 pm

stubbsy wrote:Dave

#2, #3 and #5 also work best for me but #5 is the star.


My thoughts exactly. 5 is the standout :D
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Postby christiand on Sun Dec 11, 2005 7:26 pm

Great shotes,

I'm also a member of the shot 5 is the killer party.

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Postby Jonas on Mon Dec 12, 2005 2:05 pm

I'm going to buck the trend and say shot 2. The textures and patterns of the plant are quite hypnotic.

It's also not something I would immediately identify as being an interesting subject for a macro shot, so well done for giving it a go. I can't comment on the technical aspects as I haven't done much macro work yet.
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Postby Aussie Dave on Mon Dec 12, 2005 2:11 pm

thanks Jonas. Ideally, I probably could have used slightly less DOF, as (in my mind) I wanted the cactus to look like it was growing, or crawling towards the viewer. Perhaps the furthest parts of the cactus could have been slightly more OOF in the 2nd pic (perhaps more similar to pic 5)....but I still like it.
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