First try with sigma 105mm macro (4 img)

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First try with sigma 105mm macro (4 img)

Postby Willy wombat on Mon Dec 12, 2005 7:46 am

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[img]http://www.fototime.com/{C40B1825-BD80-4A28-B21D-192C7F7D4AA6}/picture.JPG[/img]

[img]http://www.fototime.com/{B2B28181-3598-412F-9092-15ED99082AA0}/picture.JPG[/img]

[img]http://www.fototime.com/{867108FC-ECBB-4101-9DA0-3DA2EF4F844B}/picture.JPG[/img]

Any obvious problems here? Any tips?
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Postby Aussie Dave on Mon Dec 12, 2005 7:56 am

Hi WW
My favourite is number 1, although the black expanse to the right seems a little too big and my eye kind of gets drawn away from the subject. Perhaps a closer crop with not so much empty space to the right....although this is just my personal taste.

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Postby birddog114 on Mon Dec 12, 2005 7:59 am

Aussie Dave wrote:Don't let the Government see your 2nd pic, or they'll be all over you :lol:


Aussie Dave,
He's working in that section :lol:
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Postby sirhc55 on Mon Dec 12, 2005 8:57 am

Welcome to the Sigma macro fraternity with some very nice first shots - keep ’em coming :)
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Postby Oneputt on Mon Dec 12, 2005 9:02 am

WW I think that you are well on your way to mastering this lens. The world of macro is fascinating. :D
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Postby PALL on Mon Dec 12, 2005 11:31 am

welcoem willy to world of macro,congrats.i like tha first one a lot with low DOF,the rest are kinda have harsh light effect ? flash,, i always liked avalable natural light for macro tha best.flash usualy overdone stuff.i been using this lens and i am realy happy about it.it had yeald some very good results recently..,

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Postby avkomp on Mon Dec 12, 2005 11:50 am

congrats on the new lens.

I like the last cicada shot.

The first one is nice too, but I feel the OOF stuff in the top left is distracting for me.

Keep em coming.

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Postby Willy wombat on Mon Dec 12, 2005 10:50 pm

sirhc55 wrote:Welcome to the Sigma macro fraternity with some very nice first shots - keep ’em coming :)


Cheers Chris

I look forward to posting up some more soon
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Postby Willy wombat on Mon Dec 12, 2005 10:52 pm

Thanks everyone else - im looking forward to getting more good shots from the new gear and i will do lots of practice!
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Postby Slider on Mon Dec 12, 2005 11:04 pm

Fantastic WW. My love of macros is going to cost me some more money soon methinks :lol: That is a very nice lens.
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