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by Mal on Fri Dec 16, 2005 9:25 am
Mal I've got a camera, it's black. I've got some lens, they are black as well.
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by Oneputt on Fri Dec 16, 2005 10:18 am
Mal just a thought, perhaps a longer zoom lens might have been the go. They sure are cute little fellas. 
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by Mal on Fri Dec 16, 2005 10:57 am
Oneputt wrote:Mal just a thought, perhaps a longer zoom lens might have been the go. They sure are cute little fellas. 
Thanks Oneputt, but I was wanting to stick to using the 50mm at the moment. Yes there are times when I think "bugger" I wish I had a zoom on, but that is what my little experiment is all about. Gettting used to using one lens and one size only.
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by Killakoala on Fri Dec 16, 2005 10:59 am
Looks to have been difficult shooting conditions. The first image is brilliantly composed but the highlights on either side really detract from a great image. Perhaps a closer crop or even painting the highlights black might help. The overall colour seems a bit off too, as it does in the other images. Perhaps a check of hte white balance would help get some of the natural clour back into the panda's faces and fur. The panda's expression is gorgeous.
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by marcotrov on Fri Dec 16, 2005 11:14 am
#1 is nice portrait Mal but agree with Killa
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by Mal on Fri Dec 16, 2005 11:43 am
Killakoala wrote:Looks to have been difficult shooting conditions. The first image is brilliantly composed but the highlights on either side really detract from a great image. Perhaps a closer crop or even painting the highlights black might help. The overall colour seems a bit off too, as it does in the other images. Perhaps a check of hte white balance would help get some of the natural clour back into the panda's faces and fur. The panda's expression is gorgeous.
Thanks for the comments. Here is the cropped version, tried the black and even the blue on the highlights, it didn't work due to the "glowing" of the fur.
I have also adjusted the colour. This is their real colour.

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by Killakoala on Fri Dec 16, 2005 1:37 pm
Mal that is so much better, to me anyway.  How do you feel about it?
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by Mal on Fri Dec 16, 2005 1:42 pm
Killakoala wrote:Mal that is so much better, to me anyway.  How do you feel about it?
Yeah I think it is better, now all I need to do is get the tissue out and clean its dribble!!!
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by Killakoala on Fri Dec 16, 2005 1:52 pm
Mal wrote:Killakoala wrote:Mal that is so much better, to me anyway.  How do you feel about it?
Yeah I think it is better, now all I need to do is get the tissue out and clean its dribble!!!
 I hope it didn't lick you.
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by Mal on Fri Dec 16, 2005 2:07 pm
Killakoala wrote: I hope it didn't lick you.
A little dribble never hurt anyone, it’s when you are standing underneath one and it decides to relieve itself that I get upset.
But you should always remember that when dealing with multiple animals - always wash hands after being with one. There is nothing worse than having been with one animal and having it's smell on your hands then going to the next enclosure and that animal smelling "dinner" on you!!
You only make this mistake once!  Mine involved a baby owl followed by a carpet snake
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by Sheetshooter on Fri Dec 16, 2005 5:27 pm
Ignites the anthropomorphism in me. How delightful!!
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by Mal on Fri Dec 16, 2005 8:06 pm
Sheetshooter wrote:Ignites the anthropomorphism in me. How delightful!!
an·thro·po·mor·phism n
the attribution of a human form, human characteristics, or human behavior to nonhuman things such as deities in mythology and animals in children’s stories
Encarta® World English Dictionary © 1999 Microsoft Corporation. All rights reserved. Developed for Microsoft by Bloomsbury Publishing Plc.
Yes i had to look it up 
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