My first bee

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My first bee

Postby johnd on Thu Dec 29, 2005 10:09 pm

I think I've got my first half decent shot of a bee after chasing them all around the garden for days.
The flash blew out a bit. Next time I'll try with the diffuser.

Sigma 150 macro, SB800, 1/60, f22, iso200

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Postby stubbsy on Thu Dec 29, 2005 10:49 pm

John

That's a great shot - you should be proud of it.
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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Dec 29, 2005 10:50 pm

Excellent John :)
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Postby Slider on Thu Dec 29, 2005 10:55 pm

Great shot John. :D

Just out of interest, how far away from the subject were you with that lens?
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Postby mudder on Fri Dec 30, 2005 7:32 am

Wow, great detail! One thing I always notice with the dedicated macro lens's's's is the deep DOF... Wonder if it's just because I've taken my half-arsed macro stuff using the Canon 500d on the 80-400 at 400mm :?
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Postby johnd on Fri Dec 30, 2005 8:41 am

Peter, Chris, Mark and Andrew, thanks for the comments.

Mark, I think I was about 15 to 20 cms away from the bee, but the lens is only supposed to focus to 38 cms according to the scale on the lens. I could have sworn I was closer. I just put the lens on manual focus, minimum focus distance and moved in until it was sharp in the viewfinder.

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Postby Alpha_7 on Fri Dec 30, 2005 8:55 am

Looks like that bee is in dire need for a haircut or maybe an allover wax.

Great shot John! Glad you finally found a subject willing to bee still long enough to take it's photo!
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Postby Slider on Fri Dec 30, 2005 8:56 am

johnd wrote:Peter, Chris, Mark and Andrew, thanks for the comments.

Mark, I think I was about 15 to 20 cms away from the bee, but the lens is only supposed to focus to 38 cms according to the scale on the lens. I could have sworn I was closer. I just put the lens on manual focus, minimum focus distance and moved in until it was sharp in the viewfinder.

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Thanks John, I am keen to get myself a dedicated macro but don't want one that you need to be almost touching the subject. 38cm sounds preety good :D
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Postby Alex on Fri Dec 30, 2005 10:18 am

Great shot, John. Very sharp.

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Postby marcotrov on Fri Dec 30, 2005 2:25 pm

Terrific image John makes me keen to get a hold of mine :)
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Postby johnd on Sat Dec 31, 2005 8:57 am

Craig, Alex and Marco, thanks for the comments. The sharpness is getting there. I seemed to have focussed on the wings in this rather than the eyes. I guess the trick is to get them side on and try to get all of the insect in focus.

Yes Craig, they are hairy little critters. I was quite suprised really how furry they are.

Mark, I'm having a great time with the 150 sigma macro. And as you say, you don't need to be touching the subject. The lens does true 1:1 macro at 38 cms and 1:2 at 50 cms. I'm finding it a great lens for flower shots. If the flower is too big for a macro, you just take a step or two back. The lens will focus out to infinity so you can use it as a short 150 mm telephoto as well.
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