From this mornings North Beaches, here is my first offering, continuing my current interest in morning silhouettes. Please let me know what you think....

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Graig, mate very very nice pic mate love it.
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That's an exceptional image. Very impressive. Peter
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I am a sucker for silhouettes and this is a good one.
my only nits though would be the darker section in the middle that does weaken the overall effect in my opinion. Perhaps shooting from a lower angle, but then you lose the golden reflection. lovely image. Steve check out my image gallery @
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Steve, Can you elaborate on how you'd like this improved ? There is a lot of detail I decided to hide to get a simple silhouette, perhaps I can bring some of the detail back to improve it in your eyes ?
I love the silhouette
is very powerful at the top with his head/shoulders and I love the bottom bit with the strong silhouette but just the middly scction particularly the rocks dont seem to help seeing the full person. perhaps a little more gold on the water also or if you could coax a little gold backlights on the edge of the loins like where there is a hind of it at the lower right where the water ends and the rock starts? regardless this is a great shot, just wondering if more may be milked from it Steve check out my image gallery @
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beautiful silhouette! When I first saw it though I inital impression was that the guy is eating a pie and now that is stuck in my head. Steve
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Craig - this is a really beautiful silouette!! You are producing some fine 'work' lately!!
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Very nice image, Craig.
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Great strong image. Very well done, Craig.
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Very nice Craig. It is indeed a very strong image.Well done.
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This shot would have been ideal for HD layering to give definition in the middle section of the body which has become totally integrated with the land mass. Although I like the shot in principle, the disembodiment just appears to be unnatural
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Excellent work, Craig. Its one of those images which is ambiguous in that studying it, I am unsure if it was taken with the person looking towards you or towards the sun.
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Nice capture....... very raiders of the lost ark, by the sea..........
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Thanks for all the comments, I'll try to answer a few questions...
Firstly the subject is a fellow DSLR user, can you guess who ? He was facing the water, and wasn't eating a pie, infact I am pretty sure he was taking a photo. Craig - Well worth getting up early, love the morning light, it at night shots are currently my favourite shooting conditions Michael - No orange filters used, this was pretty much the colour I saw when shooting perhaps it was a little bit more yellow. Finally, I'll try another PP'ed version with more detail in it, for those that are interested, I'd also like to point out, that I blew alittle of the sun out (dead centre to had to use PP to retrieve it) I was sure someone would notice or comment, but I'm happy to say no one did so my PP skills must be improving!
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