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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Jan 23, 2006 5:18 pm

Well I (and Panofactory) whiped this shot up in a couple minutes when I was at Doug and Genista's and I was happy enough with it first go to post it here for you critique, this was another handheld pano (one of a few I did on the walk)


Warning the Big file is 1mb (and that's downsized :shock: :shock: )

Feedback welcome! Usually I upload my pano straight from the factory to you, but this time I took a few minutes to PP it a little... does it work ?

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Postby Geoff on Mon Jan 23, 2006 5:32 pm

This is a really striking image Craig!!
Bel and I house minded at a friends house that we actually walked past on the meet morning - they would like this a lot :)
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Postby wendellt on Mon Jan 23, 2006 5:39 pm

craig

excellent image it's dam wide and i can see more than i could ever if i was just standing there

now i see why you held up the group while we were makign our way back to dee why

technically i can see a few merge lines but that's easily fixed, what i am most impressed about is panofactory and yourself managed to merge the water quite well, i did a pano years back with my coolpix of a scene with an ocean and when i manually stitched it the variation waves in each pic threw off the smoothness of the final composite.

well done

your getting real good real fast, it's a biut scary
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Jan 23, 2006 11:54 pm

Thanks both of you, I guess this is worth another look :).

Geoff, I'm sure I can send them a copy if they are interested.

Wendell - This was a quick job with jpegs, I can redo this with higher quality shots and spend some time on the seams I think it might have potential... (I also liked how the water seemed pretty normal/ almost seamless).
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Postby xerubus on Tue Jan 24, 2006 12:00 am

i love it! nicely saturated.. great contrast... and interesting all over. nicely done mate...

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Postby mrbillf on Tue Jan 24, 2006 8:40 am

Very nice Pano Craig. Awesome. That would be worth printing at a reasonable size and framed.

Oh one very small thing - On the left side, that palm branch that sticks out from the side I think either needs cropping or cloned out. But that is just me.

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Postby Oneputt on Tue Jan 24, 2006 8:55 am

Craig the rooves of the houses (I presume) in the front left foreground tend to detract a little from this pano, which in all other respects is very good. :D
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Jan 24, 2006 9:10 am

Thanks for the feedback John. I am sort of in a tight situation with the roofs. I couldn't get any more elevation from where I was shooting (didn't bring the ladder :) ) I could completely crop out the whole left hand side starting at the roof line, but then you miss the "second headland".

If I cropped it from the bottom I'd lose a lot of the beach (which I really like) so I don't really want to do that.

I don't think my PP skills are up to cloning out the whole house and trees as a possible third option.
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Postby Hlop on Tue Jan 24, 2006 9:25 am

Craig,

While image is quite sharp and view is very good you can clearly see where frames were stitched. Also such a high contrast not in my taste at all though it has a right to exist :)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Jan 24, 2006 9:30 am

Hlop - Usually I don't PP my pano's at all, but have come under a fair bit of fire for the lack of punch, contrast, staturation or something along those lines. So I can definitely see where you coming from with this one.. The contrast did help lessen the affect of the "fog / sea spray" that was in a lot of my shots.


( :oops: I still haven't found any visible seams myself, and I shot it so I should, so I'm fair embrassed others can see it). :oops: :oops:
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