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Postby Heath Bennett on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:19 pm

Sunday at Newcastle baths, cropped tight from all sides. I like the way the -tri- theme works here:

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This guy did a whole series of aerials for me. He told me that I should shoot him bridge jumping sometime. Crazy backflips from stupid heights. Fun.

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Postby wendellt on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:23 pm

photography with a model and action are always so powerful

the movement is elegant as well, it's a very appealing image Heath something very consistent with your work
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:23 pm

Heath

That's the loosest "tight crop" I've ever seen in my life - looks pretty wide to me.

Good pic and when you get it cropped it will be even better. Took for ever to load and I'm on ADSL and the file is tiny. Maybe it's me.
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Postby Heath Bennett on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:29 pm

Another one, different angle. I never have seen a boy so young smoking. He looked 9! He was more keen than the other guy...

Forgive me if PP dodgey - doing it from laptop in bed.

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Postby Heath Bennett on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:31 pm

stubbsy wrote:Heath

That's the loosest "tight crop" I've ever seen in my life - looks pretty wide to me.

Good pic and when you get it cropped it will be even better. Took for ever to load and I'm on ADSL and the file is tiny. Maybe it's me.


Loose on the central focal point, tight on the whole scene. I cropped quite a lot out!
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:34 pm

Heath Bennett wrote:
stubbsy wrote:Heath

That's the loosest "tight crop" I've ever seen in my life - looks pretty wide to me.

Good pic and when you get it cropped it will be even better. Took for ever to load and I'm on ADSL and the file is tiny. Maybe it's me.


Loose on the central focal point, tight on the whole scene. I cropped quite a lot out!


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Postby nito on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:34 pm

nice action shots. I really like the pose you froze him in. :D
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Postby wendellt on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:36 pm

excellent the line of sight is great and the 2 in the background lead your eye to the subject, this is skillfull composition

i notice many outstanding aspects of your work, it's always so well exposed contrasty and dam sharp, do you shoot manual or a, s, p mode on that d2x?
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Postby Heath Bennett on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:37 pm

stubbsy wrote:
Heath Bennett wrote:
stubbsy wrote:Heath

That's the loosest "tight crop" I've ever seen in my life - looks pretty wide to me.

Good pic and when you get it cropped it will be even better. Took for ever to load and I'm on ADSL and the file is tiny. Maybe it's me.


Loose on the central focal point, tight on the whole scene. I cropped quite a lot out!


ahhhh Bloody D2X


You said and I quote mate - "I have the money, just don't want to break the bank." The ball is in your court, Sir!

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Postby Heath Bennett on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:39 pm

wendellt wrote:excellent the line of sight is great and the 2 in the background lead your eye to the subject, this is skillfull composition

i notice many outstanding aspects of your work, it's always so well exposed contrasty and dam sharp, do you shoot manual or a, s, p mode on that d2x?


Mostly, A, secondly M, rarely S.

Appreciate your kindness. Once more I have got to say I loved your Fred Bare girls images. I even asked at DJ's today if they had the winter Fred Bare branded brochure

EDIT: Also - I used channel mixer for BnW conversion.
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Postby wendellt on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:45 pm

interesting

i always thought aperture mode on the d2x couldn't get the shutterspeed right as in fast enough for moving subjects so i switched to complete manual

but htis shot was taken in on a bright day so guess it makes sense, as i usually shoot in lowlight

i better re-visit aperture priority mode on the d2x

otherwise you have dam good technical skills balanced out with creative flair

thanks for comments on fred bare
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Postby Marvin on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:53 pm

Great shot! It was good of that guy to hold up the diving board with his head. :wink:
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Postby jethro on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:56 pm

Heath, Mad shots i meam mad! Awesome composition.
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Postby bloop on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:58 pm

No idea what -tri- theme is, is that some uber photog jargon? Anyway that first shot is awesome, I hardly comment on pics because I have nothing to say, but I just had to post to say that first shot is awesome. Cheers.
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Postby ozczecho on Mon Jan 23, 2006 11:10 pm

bloop wrote:No idea what -tri- theme is, is that some uber photog jargon? Anyway that first shot is awesome, I hardly comment on pics because I have nothing to say, but I just had to post to say that first shot is awesome. Cheers.


Its a technical term explaining that there are 3 people to oneside of the pic and 3 people on the other side of the pic. In this case 3 boys and 3 girls :D :D

Great shots Heath. How good is your "model" :D
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Jan 24, 2006 12:11 am

Heath - the first shot is great, love many aspects of it. The tri theme, the suspended moment in time and the un-natural position the guy is in. Great!

My only negative is the board is cutting that guys head off a little... but given the type of shot this is, I can forgive you :P Excellent stuff!
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Postby Heath Bennett on Tue Jan 24, 2006 7:20 am

ozczecho wrote:
bloop wrote:No idea what -tri- theme is, is that some uber photog jargon? Anyway that first shot is awesome, I hardly comment on pics because I have nothing to say, but I just had to post to say that first shot is awesome. Cheers.


Its a technical term explaining that there are 3 people to oneside of the pic and 3 people on the other side of the pic. In this case 3 boys and 3 girls :D :D


True. You can go further into it by saying the jumping boy's body fits into a triangle, the -three- main focal points are at each point in a triangle...

People have interesting beliefs in the power of 3 and the shape of the triangle. Take one look at a pyrmaid!
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Postby birddog114 on Tue Jan 24, 2006 7:23 am

HB,
Great shots with action! nice capture.
Wonder what D2x can do for you? :roll:
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Postby Heath Bennett on Tue Jan 24, 2006 7:31 am

Birddog114 wrote:HB,
Great shots with action! nice capture.
Wonder what D2x can do for you? :roll:


Thanks Birdy. Here is my first upload of topless girls, just for you... Look closely :D

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Postby birddog114 on Tue Jan 24, 2006 7:44 am

HB,
Hehehehe!
Should crop the top out and getting closer to see what colour of her skin :lol: :lol: :lol:
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