Crash on the footpath!

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Crash on the footpath!

Postby Mal on Fri Jan 27, 2006 11:38 am

The kids were playing outside yesterday, and my son like any normal 3 year old went snail hunting. He found eight! He had great fun piling them on top of each other, and generally doing boy things to them.
I must confess that during the making of this photograph eight snails were harmed. BUT on the good side a Kookaburra family is well feed! :)

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On a more serious note this was my first attempt at a macro shot, so I would love some C&C
(My success rate was 2 OK shots out of 18 )
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Re: Crash on the footpath!

Postby greencardigan on Fri Jan 27, 2006 12:02 pm

Mal wrote:My success rate was 2 OK shots out of 18

I'd be fairly happy with that.

Sometimes I find myself only getting maybe 5 or 10 keepers out of a few hundred. Especially when shooting flying insects.
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Postby Slider on Fri Jan 27, 2006 12:08 pm

I think a faster shhutter speed to slow down the action would have improved things :D :wink:
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Postby Raskill on Fri Jan 27, 2006 1:48 pm

I think your panning technique needs some work to.... :lol:
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Postby Matt. K on Fri Jan 27, 2006 1:48 pm

Only high-speed video will capture these suckers and provide sharp imagery. :D :D :D
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Postby Mal on Fri Jan 27, 2006 1:58 pm

Matt. K wrote:Only high-speed video will capture these suckers and provide sharp imagery. :D :D :D


I was thinking about asking Channel 9 if I could have a loan of the cameras that they are using for the high speed shots at the cricket!
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Postby huynhie on Fri Jan 27, 2006 10:54 pm

Here is the aftermath of the crash :D

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Postby Slider on Fri Jan 27, 2006 11:12 pm

:lol: :lol: :lol:
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Postby Mal on Sat Jan 28, 2006 11:44 am

That's poor taste huynhie!
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
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