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#2 and #3 are great Kevin. Composition and OOF bacdkground create focus on subject and yet maintain the subtle connection with elements in the background.
In #2 i'd crop a little more on right margin to improve balance and begin to remove the slight distraction of blue hat stand ![]() In #3 the only comment would be the eye snatching orange thing in the bottom left corner. I'd be tempted to clone it out. Cheers marco
very nice original shots Kevin... I look forward to doing something similar when my kitchen is finally operational again...
Cheers, John
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Very nice Kevin!
These shots were shot thru a glass outside the Spanish restaurant at Nelson Bay on the Saturday 4/2. We were waiting to be seated and Kevin played with his D2x. Birddog114
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Mmmmm Dough...
Strangely enough its #2 that I like the best, the DOF is lovely and I really like it. Its a little less busy then the other two shots, which I prefer in this case.
I like this last one Kevin. The DOF is good and again the background is a little less busy, but still features the man behind the dough so to speak.
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Nice shots. My only issue with a couple of them is the DOF is perhaps too shallow, especially in the 2nd shot, where detail is lost in the foreground, but that's just me.
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