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Postby xerubus on Sat Feb 18, 2006 10:33 pm

One of a series of model shots I took today... a hell of a lot of both males and females to follow later on tonight or tomorrow.

C&C would be appreciated.

Usually I'm strict with straight horizons... but i think the slightly off horizon works okay in this shot? For me the shot has a Calvin Klein etc type of feel? I think the harsh shadows I have added give the shot a better feel.. what do you think?

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Postby Alpha_7 on Sat Feb 18, 2006 10:41 pm

I like it and look foward to more :)
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Postby xerubus on Sat Feb 18, 2006 11:22 pm

Alpha_7 wrote:I like it and look foward to more :)


ok.... for some reason this shot has turned out soft once converted for the web... can't figure out why...

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Postby Alpha_7 on Sat Feb 18, 2006 11:23 pm

Cute, but a little soft, after the resize, what sort of sharpening did you use ?
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Postby xerubus on Sat Feb 18, 2006 11:25 pm

Alpha_7 wrote:Cute, but a little soft, after the resize, what sort of sharpening did you use ?


my usual smart sharpening... not quite sure what's gone on when i've reduced it's size... might try again later on ...

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Postby Alex on Sun Feb 19, 2006 10:43 am

Mark,

Nice shots. I really like the first one. Excellent treatment. The 2nd one is nice but I the pose looks a bit unnatural and strained. Sorry just my opinion.

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