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Postby owen on Sat Feb 25, 2006 6:48 pm

Not that kind, the stuff that gets left on the shore...

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Postby Big Red on Sat Feb 25, 2006 6:59 pm

maybe a touch dark but i like it 8)
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Postby pharmer on Sat Feb 25, 2006 7:21 pm

A touch too dark - the CPL filter seems to have run amok in the top left :)

From a composition point of view - the seaweed has been slightly chopped at the bottom - catches my eye in the wrong way
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Postby Frankenstein on Sat Feb 25, 2006 7:22 pm

I agree - a bit more detail in the seaweed would improve the shot. I especially like the line of foam and the waves - they take the eye through the rest of the photo.

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Postby owen on Sat Feb 25, 2006 7:26 pm

Thanks guys. Perhaps my monitor is in dire need of calibration as the image doesn't look dark at all here. I'll see if I took any others where I might have composed the weed a bit better. Thanks for looking - it's much appreciated.

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Postby big pix on Sat Feb 25, 2006 9:23 pm

the cpl or grad filter top left takes your eye off the main point of focus....... good capture
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Postby ABG on Sat Feb 25, 2006 11:02 pm

I'll go against the folw here Owen. I really like this shot and my son (looking over my shoulder) does too :)
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Postby owen on Sun Feb 26, 2006 10:07 am

Thanks for all the comments everyone. Very much appreciated. Being up at that hour is very rewarding I think.

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