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For Dug, Alpha Self Portraits to order

Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Mar 14, 2006 10:57 pm

Well Dug, these are for you. Horribly rushed and I'd like to revisit with natural lighting.

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Soft, badly focused, shit lighting and distracting backgrounds. I added a bit of grain to shot 2, an both were ISO 800.

Enjoy Dug :)
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Postby Raskill on Tue Mar 14, 2006 11:00 pm

ummm....

I like the potw better...... :wink:
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Mar 14, 2006 11:02 pm

Raskill wrote:ummm....

I like the potw better...... :wink:


As Do I, I have to live with that face :)
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Postby Raskill on Tue Mar 14, 2006 11:07 pm

I would try one myself, but the glare off my forehead pplays havoc with the metering :lol:
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Postby avkomp on Tue Mar 14, 2006 11:26 pm

I hold Geoff responsible for this........ :lol:

we are gonna get a rash of self portraits.
the only problem is that most of us (me included) look like dropped pies when compared to the POTW!

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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Mar 14, 2006 11:32 pm

It would be unfair to hold Geoff responsible for these two, I'd already taken them (with Dug's encouragement). Nor is this my first attempt at B&W Self portraits, I think its a really challenging subject to shoot well. Macka's shot is a great example of getting it all right, I'd say most people would have a hard time getting a shot they are happy with (tieing it into MattK's recent comments) most people don't like looking at shots of themselves.
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Postby Geoff on Wed Mar 15, 2006 12:05 am

avkomp wrote:I hold Geoff responsible for this........ :lol:

we are gonna get a rash of self portraits.
the only problem is that most of us (me included) look like dropped pies when compared to the POTW!

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:D :D :D :D

This ain't a bad thing - we ALL have faces that we can rest assured our mother's love/d. :wink:
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Postby Geoff on Wed Mar 15, 2006 12:11 am

Craig - have a shave and remove some of the natural 'grain' - keep on trying, I look forward to your experiments. The 2nd imge in my opinion is far better than the first in this series. :D
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Postby Nnnnsic on Wed Mar 15, 2006 12:27 am

Nice couch. :lol:
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Postby Oneputt on Wed Mar 15, 2006 6:55 am

Sorry Craig.............Macka wins :wink: :lol:
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Postby macka on Wed Mar 15, 2006 7:27 am

I've unleashed something here... I've woken up to a multitude of self-portraits! :D

Craig, a problem in both is that you don't really look comfortable. (This is probably as much to do with your fear of self-portraits as the position you were in to try and take the photo.)

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Postby birddog114 on Wed Mar 15, 2006 7:33 am

Well! another new topic of the week:

SELF PORTRAIT
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Postby Glen on Wed Mar 15, 2006 8:46 am

Macka, you do have a lot to answer for :lol:

Craig, you can probably see how distracting the shadow over your chin etc is in the first. I think Macka advice about relaxing and your own about lighting are going to make some difference here. Try using a mirror so you can see how the shadow falls
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Postby MATT on Wed Mar 15, 2006 9:07 am

Just one comment,

Put your shirt back on :lol: :lol: :lol:


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Postby Mal on Wed Mar 15, 2006 9:33 am

Hey I thought Rokstar was the one who started all of this self portrait stuff! :wink: :wink:
He was the one who inspired me to post a self portrait a couple of months ago.
But it is nice to see that everyone is getting into it again. Maybe we could have a self-portrait thread.
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Postby Geoff on Wed Mar 15, 2006 9:38 am

MATT wrote:Just one comment,

Put your shirt back on :lol: :lol: :lol:


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yeah - this isn't a nudity forum, you didn't see Macka without her shirt on did you huh!? :shock: :D :D
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Mar 15, 2006 9:41 am

I hadn't worn a shirt all day (I was sick at home) so why put one on for a adlib photo shoot ? :) Sorry if I've offended anyone :roll: :lol:
(I think a self portrait thread wouldn't be that bad, as long as it doesn't turn into another LDS thread :))
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Postby wendellt on Wed Mar 15, 2006 9:44 am

Craig
the 1st one is a revealing shot and to make it worse your looking right into the camera it's so in your face - very confronting

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Postby birddog114 on Wed Mar 15, 2006 9:49 am

Mal wrote:But it is nice to see that everyone is getting into it again. Maybe we could have a self-portrait thread.


A self-portrait challenge or a self-portrait of the month :roll:
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Postby Mal on Wed Mar 15, 2006 10:01 am

Geoff wrote:
MATT wrote:Just one comment,

Put your shirt back on :lol: :lol: :lol:


MATT


yeah - this isn't a nudity forum, you didn't see Macka without her shirt on did you huh!? :shock: :D :D


I took mine off :) :) :) http://www.dslrusers.net/viewtopic.php? ... ht=#166838
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Mar 15, 2006 10:04 am

Mal wrote:
Geoff wrote:
MATT wrote:Just one comment,

Put your shirt back on :lol: :lol: :lol:


MATT


yeah - this isn't a nudity forum, you didn't see Macka without her shirt on did you huh!? :shock: :D :D


I took mine off :) :) :) http://www.dslrusers.net/viewtopic.php? ... ht=#166838


And Mal it really added to the dramatic affect, I can't image the same shot with clothes on being nearly as affective.
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Postby Geoff on Wed Mar 15, 2006 10:05 am

Fair enough - just getting my gear off now for a full nude portrait - watch this space. :D :D :D

I'll just take my tongue out of my cheek. :D :)
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Postby PiroStitch on Wed Mar 15, 2006 10:05 am

Good one Macka...you've started a scary trend in dslrusers - self topless portraits...

Craig, play around with some more lighting when you're feeling better dude. Everyone has a setting that suits them best, have a look at Rokkstar's self portraits - those were sublime in terms of colours and lighting. ;)
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Postby Mal on Wed Mar 15, 2006 10:09 am

Geoff wrote:Fair enough - just getting my gear off now for a full nude portrait - watch this space. :D :D :D

I'll just take my tongue out of my cheek. :D :)


Careful Geoff, those two sentances should not be used together :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Mind now being taken out of gutter...
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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Mar 15, 2006 10:16 am

Godammit - I now have to wipe the cornflakes off the monitor - 110% for effort Alpha :wink: :)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Mar 15, 2006 10:19 am

Mal wrote:
Geoff wrote:Fair enough - just getting my gear off now for a full nude portrait - watch this space. :D :D :D

I'll just take my tongue out of my cheek. :D :)


Careful Geoff, those two sentances should not be used together :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Mind now being taken out of gutter...


The imagery... looks like the competition is hotting up. I must admit I don't think I'm as flexible as Geoff would appear to be by that last comment.
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Postby Geoff on Wed Mar 15, 2006 10:30 am

Alpha_7 wrote:
Mal wrote:
Geoff wrote:Fair enough - just getting my gear off now for a full nude portrait - watch this space. :D :D :D

I'll just take my tongue out of my cheek. :D :)


Careful Geoff, those two sentances should not be used together :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Mind now being taken out of gutter...


The imagery... looks like the competition is hotting up. I must admit I don't think I'm as flexible as Geoff would appear to be by that last comment.


lol - you're all rude buggers :) but oh...so funny!! :D :D
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Postby Nnnnsic on Wed Mar 15, 2006 11:26 am

Mal wrote:Hey I thought Rokstar was the one who started all of this self portrait stuff!


I've been doing self-portraits since my second year of Uni in 2003!!!
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Mar 15, 2006 11:31 am

Nnnnsic wrote:
Mal wrote:Hey I thought Rokstar was the one who started all of this self portrait stuff!


I've been doing self-portraits since my second year of Uni in 2003!!!


Sorry Leigh you not nearly as good looking at Rokkstar :lol: :twisted:
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Postby Nnnnsic on Wed Mar 15, 2006 12:51 pm

Alpha_7 wrote:Sorry Leigh you not nearly as good looking at Rokkstar :lol: :twisted:


:cry: :cry: :cry:
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Mar 15, 2006 1:25 pm

Just as interesting a subject, just not 'classical 'hoff' good looks' :)
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Postby wally on Wed Mar 15, 2006 3:15 pm

Craig, prretty portrates. U R very handsum man :D
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Mar 15, 2006 3:21 pm

Thanks kindly Wally, haven't heard from you in a while. Are you into taking portraits, or self portraits ?
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Postby Mal on Wed Mar 15, 2006 3:28 pm

Nnnnsic wrote:
Alpha_7 wrote:Sorry Leigh you not nearly as good looking at Rokkstar :lol: :twisted:


:cry: :cry: :cry:


I think you need to be a suffer of Alopecia to be good looking.... :)
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Postby wally on Wed Mar 15, 2006 3:29 pm

Alfa, hi, I's needs to use the balaklava :lol: :lol:
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Postby wally on Wed Mar 15, 2006 3:30 pm

Alfa, hi, I's needs to use the balaklava :lol: :lol:
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Mar 15, 2006 3:33 pm

Thanks Mal, I've now learnt a new word.

And Wally, I don't mind if you have a 'balaklava' or a paper bag on your head... remember the key to a most good portraits is the eyes 8)
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Postby wally on Wed Mar 15, 2006 3:38 pm

Ta Alfa, donnt have a balaklava, buts i got a paper bag from Foodland in balaklava :lol:
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