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another Self Portrait

Postby Big Red on Tue Mar 14, 2006 11:05 pm

Zeke's self portrait inspired me to have a go at it my self as i wanted to try out an old screw mount lens and it was raining at the time.
guessed the focus and took the pic but i looked like an old red faced drunk due to the light so i had a go at converting it to B&W.
...then i saw Mackas self portrait and nearly didn't post mine ... what the hell, Beauty and the beast comes to mind though :lol:
Taken with a Takumar 50/1.4 screw mount lens with the Pentax DS at f8 and a couple of seconds [roughly from memory]
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Mar 14, 2006 11:08 pm

I like it, much better then mine (sic) and while I like Macka's more this still is a nicely handled SP. I like the DOF and the B&W treatment.

Nicely done.
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Postby Matt. K on Tue Mar 14, 2006 11:25 pm

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That's a very powerful, couragous self portrait. Incidentally....most folk don't like seeing their own pictures because they don't quite look right. That's because we get to know ourselves in a mirror...and a mirror shows a reversed image. Try flipping your image over in Photoshop to see if you feel more comfortable with it. Given the pick between a reversed and a non reverse image nearly everybody will prefer the reversed. And very few will pick up that its been reversed providing there are no other clues in the image...such as text. Portrait Photographers....there is a message here!
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Postby Geoff on Wed Mar 15, 2006 12:09 am

Big Red - I'm glad you posted!! I like this image, it has a rustic feel to it that shows your character, a bit cheeky; but serious too. You've done well, I think Matt K's comments hit the nail on the head...precise as always.
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Postby gunn parker on Wed Mar 15, 2006 1:11 am

I think this is a very good shot and would be very happy if it was of me :)
you have done well

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Postby Oneputt on Wed Mar 15, 2006 6:53 am

I think that is an excellent result Shane :D
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Postby macka on Wed Mar 15, 2006 7:32 am

I think this is a great shot - I agree with Geoff in that your face hints at your character, which gives it a lot of interest, while still looking like a very natural expression. I like the lighting very much as well.

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Postby stubbsy on Wed Mar 15, 2006 11:46 am

Shane

I think this shot is equally as good as Macka's. You've got great eye contact with the viewer, the framing with the hint of OOF background, the strong B & W treatment and all tho e interesting lines on your face work together to create a strong image. And somehow there's a slight feeling of the larrikin to this image that also appeals. Well done.
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Postby Big Red on Wed Mar 15, 2006 7:33 pm

thanks for the comments ... much appreciated but isn't anyone going to ask me how long it took to photoshop all those wrinkles in ...

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Postby blacknstormy on Wed Mar 15, 2006 7:42 pm

Great shot Shane - definitely hints at your 'cheeky streak'. Beautifully lit, and engaging.

how long it took to photoshop all those wrinkles in

I thought it had been heavily airbrushed ?????? LOL

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Postby Glen on Wed Mar 15, 2006 7:45 pm

Great shot Shane, great lighting and tremendous expression, serious with just a hint of cheekiness in the eyes
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