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Postby Oneputt on Fri Mar 17, 2006 9:28 pm

For the past couiple of nights I have been playing around with the moon. Would be interested in comments.

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Postby Slider on Fri Mar 17, 2006 10:09 pm

John, I like the first. The cloud patterns are very intriguing :D I do find the horizon a little distracting though.
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Postby Oneputt on Fri Mar 17, 2006 10:18 pm

Mmmm.... there I go again. Never think about that, I'll staighten it up. :oops:
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Postby Zeeke on Fri Mar 17, 2006 10:25 pm

Nicely captured John, its a pitty you didnt get number 1's sky with number 2's background.. would of made a beautiful image!

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Postby Slider on Fri Mar 17, 2006 10:26 pm

Oneputt wrote:Mmmm.... there I go again. Never think about that, I'll staighten it up. :oops:


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Postby wendellt on Fri Mar 17, 2006 10:53 pm

the first one is whacked - like it
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i woudl just comment that technically it looks like the tripod was affeted by vibration the defined areas look slightly soft, for an image liek that i think it would look much better if it were sharp
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Postby Steffen on Fri Mar 17, 2006 11:34 pm

I like the tone in both, and clouds look cute in #1. But for my wall, it would be #2. This sky and earth separation works well for me. Thanks for sharing.

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Postby Oneputt on Sat Mar 18, 2006 6:58 am

Wendell I think that the softness may be caused by movement of the clouds and moon rather than tripod vibration, there was very litte wind on both evenings.
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Postby CraigVTR on Sat Mar 18, 2006 1:56 pm

Great shots. Love the sky in #1, noticed the great cloud formations while working the other night. The only thing is the burned out moon. Is it possible to capture two images and overlay them in PS so there is detail in the moon? Much as we see it with the naked eye.

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Postby Oneputt on Sat Mar 18, 2006 3:02 pm

Craig I know that it is and one evening I guess I should give it a go. :D
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Postby dooda on Sat Mar 18, 2006 3:13 pm

I think I would really like the first one without any horizon or water. It would turn it into more of an abstract and separate it from all the other night shots that are all over.
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