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Postby PALL on Mon Apr 03, 2006 7:44 am

after many shots mostly ruined up either cuz of bad light or blurr but this one she was hungary and sitting near my door"yellowesh" which worked as good reflector for sun light,shot handheld at 1/250,f4.5,

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Postby losfp on Mon Apr 03, 2006 8:47 am

Now THAT is a close up :)

Very cool, I like it.. The only thing I could suggest for improvement is that I'd love to have the eyes in focus instead of the nose.
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Postby the foto fanatic on Mon Apr 03, 2006 9:09 am

Yes, nice pic.
Well framed, but it would be much better if the eyes were sharp.
Thanks for posting. :)
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Postby avkomp on Mon Apr 03, 2006 10:37 am

nice portrait but would have been much stronger if the eyes were sharp.

looks like af locked up on the area under the nose.

whte balance seems a little off also

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Postby BT*ist on Mon Apr 03, 2006 7:14 pm

Yes, perhaps retake the image and make the eyes the focus. But I still think it's a very striking image, therefore I recommend you title the image 'sniff' - that way people will assume you deliberately focussed on the nose and then this one will work fine! :wink: (Sorry, I'm in a good mood as I'm this // close to finally getting outta work)

Very striking image, I like it.
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Postby obzelite on Mon Apr 03, 2006 7:46 pm

very good shot, like the others said the eyes being sharp would really make this a seller i think.
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