DSLRUsers.com

A discussion forum - and more - for users of Digital Single Lens Reflex cameras.

Skip to content

Arty wedding shots

Got a thin skin? Then look elsewhere. Post a link to an image that you've made, and invite others to offer their critiques. Honesty is encouraged, but please be positive in your constructive criticism. Flaming and just plain nastiness will not be tolerated. Please note that this is not an area for you to showcase your images, nor is this a place for you to show-off where you have been. This is an area for you to post images so that you may share with us a technique that you have mastered, or are trying to master. Typically, no more than about four images should be posted in any one post or thread, and the maximum size of any side of any image should not exceed 950 px.

Moderators: Greg B, Nnnnsic, Geoff, Glen, gstark, Moderators

Forum rules
Please note that image critiquing is a matter of give and take: if you post images for critique, and you then expect to receive criticism, then it is also reasonable, fair and appropriate that, in return, you post your critique of the images of other members here as a matter of courtesy. So please do offer your critique of the images of others; your opinion is important, and will help everyone here enjoy their visit to far greater extent.

Also please note that, unless you state something to the contrary, other members might attempt to repost your image with their own post processing applied. We see this as an acceptable form of critique, but should you prefer that others not modify your work, this is perfectly ok, and you should state this, either within your post, or within your signature.

Images posted here should conform with the general forum guidelines. Image sizes should not exceed 950 pixels along the largest side (height or width) and typically no more than four images per post or thread.

Please also ensure that you have a meaningful location included in your profile. Please refer to the FAQ for details of what "meaningful" is.
Write comments

Arty wedding shots

Postby padey on Mon Apr 24, 2006 9:46 am

A few arty shots taken on saturday for your critique. I've got think skin, so fire away...

85mm f2 ISO800 1/90s
Image

12mm f8 ISO100 1/2s
Image

85mm f3.3 ISO800 1/90s
Image
Andrew


Canon make photocopiers and stick lenses on them....
padey
Member
 
Posts: 464
Joined: Wed Mar 08, 2006 2:23 pm
Location: Sydney, Hills Area
Top

Postby gstark on Mon Apr 24, 2006 9:57 am

Andrew,

Nice work, and I especially like the third. It seems to convey a message or two.

St Pauls in Burwood? There's not too many churches around that sport areal organ ...

In that inside church image, the colour balance seems to me to be too warm - I'm looking at pink paper and tablecloth in the foreground, and I'm thinking that this isn't quite how it should be.
g.
Gary Stark
Nikon, Canon, Bronica .... stuff
The people who want English to be the official language of the United States are uncomfortable with their leaders being fluent in it - US Pres. Bartlet
User avatar
gstark
Site Admin
 
Posts: 22924
Joined: Thu Aug 05, 2004 11:41 pm
Location: Bondi, NSW
Top

Postby padey on Mon Apr 24, 2006 10:15 am

gstark wrote:Andrew,

Nice work, and I especially like the third. It seems to convey a message or two.


Yeah, i guess it depends on what you believe. The couple were very religious, so i was a little concerned.

St Pauls in Burwood? There's not too many churches around that sport areal organ ...


The church is in Nth Sydney. The name escapes me as i know there are a few old churches in Nth Sydney, but it could be St Thomas...

In that inside church image, the colour balance seems to me to be too warm - I'm looking at pink paper and tablecloth in the foreground, and I'm thinking that this isn't quite how it should be.


yeah, you're right. The WB is off. I'll have to pull the temp back in raw file.
Andrew


Canon make photocopiers and stick lenses on them....
padey
Member
 
Posts: 464
Joined: Wed Mar 08, 2006 2:23 pm
Location: Sydney, Hills Area
Top

Postby gstark on Mon Apr 24, 2006 10:25 am

Andrew,

padey wrote:
gstark wrote:Nice work, and I especially like the third. It seems to convey a message or two.


Yeah, i guess it depends on what you believe. The couple were very religious, so i was a little concerned.



:)


St Pauls in Burwood? There's not too many churches around that sport areal organ ...


The church is in Nth Sydney. The name escapes me as i know there are a few old churches in Nth Sydney, but it could be St Thomas...


I think I know it, and I think I've done a wedding there myself, which is why it looked somewhat familiar.

Thanx.
g.
Gary Stark
Nikon, Canon, Bronica .... stuff
The people who want English to be the official language of the United States are uncomfortable with their leaders being fluent in it - US Pres. Bartlet
User avatar
gstark
Site Admin
 
Posts: 22924
Joined: Thu Aug 05, 2004 11:41 pm
Location: Bondi, NSW
Top

Postby daniel_r on Mon Apr 24, 2006 10:26 am

Andrew, nice work.
Pull the temp back a bit on #2 and you'll have a winner.
D.
Daniel_R's Flickr gallery
I shoot with Nikon stuff.
User avatar
daniel_r
Senior Member
 
Posts: 749
Joined: Fri Jan 28, 2005 1:58 pm
Location: Canberra, ACT.
Top

Postby sirhc55 on Mon Apr 24, 2006 10:30 am

I like, in particular, the third shot of the cross. The symbolism of the cobweb is priceless :)
Chris
--------------------------------
I started my life with nothing and I’ve still got most of it left
User avatar
sirhc55
Key Member
 
Posts: 12930
Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2004 6:57 pm
Location: Port Macquarie - Olympus EM-10
Top

Postby wmaburnett on Mon Apr 24, 2006 11:06 am

Very well done! I love the book one the most!
Nikon D70s, Nikkor 18-70 3.5-5-6 DX AF-S, Nikkor 80-200 2.8D ED, Nikkor 60 2.8D Micro, SB-600 Flash, Kingston 1GB CF card.
Http://www.WBurnett.com
wmaburnett
Member
 
Posts: 249
Joined: Tue Jun 14, 2005 7:00 am
Location: Minnesota, United States
Top

Postby Nnnnsic on Mon Apr 24, 2006 1:52 pm

Oooh.

I like the second.

Might make a nice black & white. :wink:
Producer & Editor @ GadgetGuy.com.au
Contributor for fine magazines such as PC Authority and Popular Science.
User avatar
Nnnnsic
I'm a jazz singer... so I know what I'm doing
 
Posts: 7770
Joined: Sun Aug 08, 2004 12:29 am
Location: Cubicle No. 42... somewhere in Bondi, NSW
Top

Postby Manta on Mon Apr 24, 2006 2:19 pm

Great stuff Padey. Agree with previous callers about the WB on the bridal register shot but it's still my favourite. Interesting angle I hadn't seen before.
Simon
D300 l MB-D10 l D70 l SB-800 l 70-200 VR l TC 17-E l 18-70 f3.5-4.5 l 70-300 f4-5.6 l 50 f1.4 l 90 Macro f2.8 l 12-24 f4
http://www.redbubble.com/people/manta
User avatar
Manta
Former Outstanding Member Of The Year
 
Posts: 3815
Joined: Tue Nov 30, 2004 10:49 pm
Location: Hamilton Qld
Top

Postby Hudo on Mon Apr 24, 2006 2:35 pm

Hi,

For me I really liked the second posted shot.

Mark
Hudo
Member
 
Posts: 431
Joined: Mon Jun 20, 2005 8:18 pm
Location: Melbourne, Victoria
Top

Postby suzanneg on Tue Apr 25, 2006 9:57 am

I love the composition of the registry shot. This angle of the church is lovely. :D
Canon EOS 350D Tamron 18-200mm
Just what do you think you're doing Dave?
User avatar
suzanneg
Member
 
Posts: 315
Joined: Sun Mar 19, 2006 8:26 pm
Location: Epping, Sydney
Top
Write comments

Return to Image Reviews and Critiques
Powered by phpBB® Forum Software © phpBB Group
Copyright © 2005 - 2022 Gary Stark


Portal XL 5.0 ~ Plain 0.2
cron