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Darling Harbour - Misc

Postby Alpha_7 on Mon May 01, 2006 4:25 pm

Here is a string of fairly unrelated shots all taken on the same day.

The Meeting Place
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Stubbsy says follow the light, that's where you'll find me.
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On the back of a Guardian
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Feedback please ;) - I've tried to compensate for the Bright LCD here so hopefully these are a little better.
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Postby macka on Mon May 01, 2006 6:18 pm

Craig,

#1 doesn't do a whole lot for me.

#2 is really nice, and exposed well to capture the lovely soft light.

#3 is kind of cool and growing on me, but I think I'd prefer it straight...
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Postby CraigVTR on Mon May 01, 2006 6:24 pm

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#1 mmmm nah. :)
#2 Excellent light, and very nice of the bird to pose for you. :lol:
#3 Nice subject well lit but would look better with no, or a straight background.
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Postby stubbsy on Mon May 01, 2006 7:24 pm

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#1 - I like this compositionally, but think the treatment lets it down - I'd like to see a grittier B & W conversion

#2 - By far the best of this three - good light, well framed

#3 - does nothing other than bring out the horizon nazi in me - your subject doesn't dominate the shot enough - I keep looking at the background
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Postby sirhc55 on Mon May 01, 2006 7:38 pm

What Peter has said :wink:
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Postby moz on Mon May 01, 2006 7:48 pm

#2 I'd file under "good idea, must shoot it properly next time", the smog makes it feel dirty to me, but not in a useful way if that makes sense.

#3 I'd like more space between the top of the head and the edge of the shot.
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Postby marcotrov on Mon May 01, 2006 8:09 pm

Ditto with comments thus far Craig I think #2 is a winner the gull in top third just adds that little out of the ordinary. Good job.
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Postby suzanneg on Mon May 01, 2006 10:51 pm

Guess I'm going with the consensus here. I love number 2, the gull adds to the shot, and the captured light is lovely.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon May 01, 2006 10:55 pm

Wow, I'm suprised, I nearly didn't even put the lighthouse in. The last time I posted (what I thought was a good shot of it, it recieved a lot of negative reviews, so this time I put it in only as tip of the hat to the elusive Stubbsy). So I'm suprised and pleased by the response, unfortunately I can't seem to FTP anything at present otherwise I'd try to tweak the shots such as a grittier version of Urban.
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Postby nito on Mon May 01, 2006 11:02 pm

Considering I never once saw you with a tripod, the shots are really well done for hand held.

The first shot would be great if you had some blurry people walk underneath the urban. It seems to be missing something with anything else.

Lighthouse shot is very elegant with the flying bird in the background.

The merit for the last shot is the curvature of the dragon. I would centre dragon and make it into a portrait shot with less background. The texture is amazing and reallt draws you to it.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon May 01, 2006 11:08 pm

nito wrote:Considering I never once saw you with a tripod, the shots are really well done for hand held.

The first shot would be great if you had some blurry people walk underneath the urban. It seems to be missing something with anything else.

Lighthouse shot is very elegant with the flying bird in the background.

The merit for the last shot is the curvature of the dragon. I would centre dragon and make it into a portrait shot with less background. The texture is amazing and reallt draws you to it.


No tripod, I can't imagine how sore I would of been had I been lugging the benro around as well, the trick with the last shot was the Dragon statue was my tripod! I rested it on the back and liked the affect, strangely enough it seems to be the least popular shot ;-)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue May 02, 2006 12:45 am

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Not sure if this is heading more urban or not, perhaps it needs some colour or a semi destat look ?
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