A polaroid moment

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A polaroid moment

Postby Simon on Mon May 01, 2006 10:47 pm

Hi peoplz,

This is my first post on this forum - I have been hanging around on other forums for a few years but noticed this one here locally just recently. There seems to be a good mood and flavour here :D

I'm a local myself and do some paying event work here when I can. I also enjoy experimenting in alternative areas of photo work.

Below is some idea I have about alternative presentation methods. I'd be interested in your comments on it.

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Postby avkomp on Mon May 01, 2006 10:51 pm

cant see the image though.

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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon May 01, 2006 10:53 pm

Interesting presentation and while I like it, I'm interested to see more of your work particularly if you have some in focus ones to share ? Anyways, Welcome to the forum, I hope you enjoy your stay!
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Postby Dug on Mon May 01, 2006 11:04 pm

Focus smokus I love the image and the border it has a wonderful feel to it just a great polaroid shot.

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Postby suzanneg on Mon May 01, 2006 11:12 pm

Can't see a photo - just the little red X.
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Postby sirhc55 on Mon May 01, 2006 11:16 pm

Simon - welcome to the forum and what a superb photo. The presentation is excellent (and I am a great hater of borders), the action feel, the colours, the subject all add up to one superlative photo.
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Postby Simon on Mon May 01, 2006 11:16 pm

Alpha_7 wrote:. . . particularly if you have some in focus ones . . .


Heh, well I reckon in-focus shots are easy to get. The moment and the projection of the image to the viewer is the hard part :?

Now a word from my sponsor - this guy wants sharp, try this ! :D

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Postby Geoff on Mon May 01, 2006 11:25 pm

Welcome to the forum Simon - you will love it here. Many of us are addicted, I am one of them!

I like the feel of the first shot, and whilst sounding a little well, non arty farty, I would've preferred this one to be a LITTLE more in focus. That said it's a goodie! The second one - yes, it sure is sharp.

Are you a Nikon or Canon man? What gear/lenses are you shooting with? Lots of members put their weaponary in their signature. I like to see what results people achieve with what lenses.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon May 01, 2006 11:28 pm

Simon I meant no offence with my in focus comment (plenty of my shots aren't in focus, some intentionally, often not so intentionally)

The second shot is definitely sharp! The women has great facial features! and again welcome to the forum!
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Postby Simon on Mon May 01, 2006 11:35 pm

Thanks for all the comments guys.

I too have reservations about framed shots and use them with great reserve. Gear: D2Hs, Nikkor 17-35 f/2.8, ISO 1000 + grain added in PP and about 1/30 sec

I'm looking into better ways to present work so these comments you give are well receieved.

I have so many pics and I'm lazy as hell when updating websites etc so I'll post a few more that I reckon you might like.

(Craig - I was only kidding too - just my sense of humour)

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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon May 01, 2006 11:42 pm

Simon wrote:(Craig - I was only kidding too - just my sense of humour)

Thanks again.


Excellent, a sense of humour will get your far, and you have some nice equipment too, and your definitely in the right place for feedback, it comes thick and fast around here most the time ;)
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