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by wendellt on Sun May 07, 2006 12:19 am
some of my on the fly model portraiture at this seasons fashion week
all flash work done with a sb800 on a sc28 cord ttl mode, and 28-70 f2.8 lens
remember backstage work is quick it's not studio work, i had 20 minutes to shoot then had to go off to shoot the runway. I am happy with the off camera shoe flash lighting and the feel of the images.
this one is composed off centre intentionally
tiah eckhardt smiles behind a paper cover pic is herself on the runway
i try to tell a story when i setup shots
kick ass lighting and mood achieved with 1 sb800
some more can be found HERE http://www.zeduce.org/images/fashion/mafw06syd/backstage1.htm
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by PiroStitch on Sun May 07, 2006 12:25 am
Awesome stuff Wendell as always. Love the colours and tones you've created with the SB800.
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by Alpha_7 on Sun May 07, 2006 12:26 am
I like these a lot better then the other series, I can feel the story telling behind them.
#1 Deep wide eyes, lovely but perhaps the WB is off ? to me the colouring seems wrong ?
#2 Nice setup, love the cheeky smile, minor issues with cutting of the chin and the feeling of looking down on tiah, but other then that sweet
#3 In away probably my favourite, interesting lighting and the one eye opened doll and then the eye in her hair make this a powerful shot
#4 Interesting but, maybe coz he's a bloke or maybe it's a little too staged ? it just isn't as strong for me.
Nice work Wendell! Checking out your gallery now!
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by Alpha_7 on Sun May 07, 2006 12:30 am
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by Alex on Sun May 07, 2006 11:14 am
Great stuff as alway, Wendell!
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by gstark on Sun May 07, 2006 11:15 am
Wendell,
These are far better than the first four you posted. All have appeal, and are great eye-candy. Well done.
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by wendellt on Sun May 07, 2006 11:22 am
cool thanks guys
backstage is more fulfilling in terms of getting more creative
on hte runway i am forced to shoot a certain way the way the mags want full length sharp just the standard look. for some of the smaller shows i experimented with panning and slower shutter speed effects from the side
but most of the time i had to take the boring shot
stay tuned with that previous link many many more backstage action to come
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by stubbsy on Sun May 07, 2006 12:36 pm
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Cracker shots. #2 is fantastic compositionally even without the story explained. #3 is wonderfully whimsical with the one eyed doll and the eye in the hair. I find these much stronger images than your runway shots since they show more of the character of the models. Keep em coming.
Of your other images - I can't belive how un lifelike this model looks in both her images - she looks like a plastic doll.
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by Slider on Sun May 07, 2006 3:48 pm
Wendell, you've done it again. These are great with the second being my pick. 
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by Manta on Sun May 07, 2006 3:59 pm
Wendell - these are great! As adamant as I was in my other post about the catwalk stuff, these are really appealing. As has been said here already, you've captured the true characters without all the facade.
I like!
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by wendellt on Sun May 07, 2006 4:12 pm
Manta wrote:Wendell - these are great! As adamant as I was in my other post about the catwalk stuff, these are really appealing. As has been said here already, you've captured the true characters without all the facade.
I like!
thankyou everyone
that's my aim to de-mystify the fashion industry without all the bad elements presented in the media the industry is very professional the models have personality and the creative aspect of fashion is a pleasure to photograph i don't have to mention the aesthetical qualities.
anyway some runway is really beautiful depends on the presentation format
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by daniel_r on Sun May 07, 2006 4:14 pm
Wendell, these are captured and processed in your normal style - well done.
I like the photojournalism aspect you've brought to the image in #2.
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by LostDingo on Sun May 07, 2006 5:54 pm
Good lighting effect, has more natural tones.
Were you hand holding the flash via cord or on a bracket?
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by wendellt on Sun May 07, 2006 6:04 pm
LostDingo wrote:Good lighting effect, has more natural tones.
Were you hand holding the flash via cord or on a bracket?
handholding 1 flash unit in left hand D2x in right hand
11 0' clock lighting as usual
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by LostDingo on Sun May 07, 2006 6:07 pm
wendellt wrote:LostDingo wrote:Good lighting effect, has more natural tones.
Were you hand holding the flash via cord or on a bracket?
handholding 1 flash unit in left hand D2x in right hand 11 0' clock lighting as usual
well it worked well being off balance, good work!
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by marcotrov on Sun May 07, 2006 6:13 pm
Terrific portraits Wendell. I particularly like #2 for its quirky and very effective composition and #4 for its perfect exposure and lighting
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by mudder on Sun May 07, 2006 8:12 pm
You're really showing your flair and talent for this sort of stuff mate, terrific lighting and subject setup...
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by Steffen on Sun May 07, 2006 11:35 pm
wendellt wrote:LostDingo wrote:Were you hand holding the flash via cord or on a bracket?
handholding 1 flash unit in left hand D2x in right hand 11 0' clock lighting as usual
I was wondering about the same thing. How do you operate the zoom? More importantly, how long can you hold the D2X plus a heavy lens in one hand?? If you're not careful you end up with arms like Popeye
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by wendellt on Mon May 08, 2006 11:51 am
Steffen wrote:wendellt wrote:LostDingo wrote:Were you hand holding the flash via cord or on a bracket?
handholding 1 flash unit in left hand D2x in right hand 11 0' clock lighting as usual
I was wondering about the same thing. How do you operate the zoom? More importantly, how long can you hold the D2X plus a heavy lens in one hand?? If you're not careful you end up with arms like Popeye  Cheers Steffen.
you can easily hold a d2x in one hand if you hold it right i balance the thing sideways grip facing downwards most of the weight is counterbalanced if you hold it like that
if you hold the d2x landscape which i normally don't for the work i do that strains your hand
I put down the flash first then figure out the focal length and focus points, then take the pic
it's an annoying process but i handle it, i think i'm going to make myself a makeshift belt that i can lodge the flash on so i change settigns on the camera without having to place the flash on the ground
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by Alpha_7 on Mon May 08, 2006 11:56 am
Wendell - What about a lens bag (SB-800 Side to clip on your belt, that way you can rest (safely) at your side while you get the focal length and focus right ?
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