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First time at beach.. (fixed...)

Postby tyrone_tong on Mon May 08, 2006 3:13 pm

First time to use a "black card" ... (I don't know how to call it..)
It was windy and cold.... :?
Please comment :oops:


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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon May 08, 2006 3:16 pm

Pics don't show up :(
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Postby PiroStitch on Mon May 08, 2006 3:16 pm

can't view images...

"Forbidden

You don't have permission to access /main.php on this server."
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Postby tyrone_tong on Mon May 08, 2006 3:18 pm

OH :?
maybe i give out the html...
#1
http://old.fotoc.com/tyrone_tong/7-5-06 ... p.jpg.html
#2
http://old.fotoc.com/tyrone_tong/7-5-06 ... 9.jpg.html
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Postby xerubus on Mon May 08, 2006 3:22 pm

still not seeing the shots.. even with the html
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Postby rookie2 on Mon May 08, 2006 3:26 pm

tyrone

i really like #1

I live down the bay and havent seen it look so alluring!!

A great capture.


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Postby xerubus on Mon May 08, 2006 3:31 pm

#1 is a great shot... nicely done.

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Postby avkomp on Mon May 08, 2006 3:52 pm

1 is my favourite also. well done.


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Postby losfp on Mon May 08, 2006 4:10 pm

Yep, I really like the first one. Moody, atmospheric, beautifully exposed. :)
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Postby agriffiths on Mon May 08, 2006 5:36 pm

I really like the perspective in the first one.
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Postby bloop on Mon May 08, 2006 7:47 pm

I like the first one too. Your border is a bit too thin at the top though.
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Postby bindiblue on Mon May 08, 2006 8:04 pm

Great shots, the 1st is my choice, it has a really lovely mystical look,, well done,

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Postby nito on Mon May 08, 2006 8:25 pm

no 1 with the dark moody clouds are great.

Now what is a black card?
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Postby Alex on Mon May 08, 2006 8:27 pm

No.1 is great!

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Postby Matt. K on Mon May 08, 2006 8:32 pm

No 1 is masterful!
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Postby stubbsy on Mon May 08, 2006 8:52 pm

Tyrone - #1 is exceptionally well composed and makes fantastic use of the light. #2 fails because it's let down by an uninspring foreground from the time exposed waves
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Postby Killakoala on Mon May 08, 2006 8:54 pm

The first one is sensational. Great work.
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Postby rookie2 on Mon May 08, 2006 9:07 pm

Now what is a black card?


I think tyrone is referring to the use of the black frame/post card style he has used for the first time.

I think #1 is good enough as a stand alone pic anyway. :D :D

looking forward to more of your pics Tyrone..

it was definitely worth going out in the cold and wet weather to end up with this!
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Postby owen on Mon May 08, 2006 9:14 pm

Number 1 is my pick too. I just noticed what looks like a storm or rain out to sea, I really like the way that the wharf is leading out to that.
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Postby tyrone_tong on Tue May 09, 2006 12:53 pm

Thank you for comments.
Sorry for my english :oops: (The black card......)
I was using a card with black colour to cover the sky after around 2 seconds so that the sky did not over exposed.
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The total exposed time is 10 seconds. :roll:
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Postby marcotrov on Tue May 09, 2006 1:00 pm

Tyrone that first image is an absolute beauty. Terrific lighting... great capture mate. :)
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