YAS of Bogey Hole

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YAS of Bogey Hole

Postby radar on Sat May 20, 2006 11:40 pm

A few from this morning.

I got up early, 5am, looked at the sky, but it was cloudy. However, there was one star, so that did it for me, there may be some breaks. I've been meaning to get a good Bogey Hole sunrise, but lately I had been stumped by clouds, rain, big swell.

I got to King Edward Park and they were just unlocking the gates :shock:

All photos taken with Tokina 12-24.

There was just a slight NE wind, so the water surface had a little bit of a ripple in it. (click on image for a larger one)

this was at dawn
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One which is a lower perspective.
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Once the sun was just getting out of the water behind the rocks
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It was getting to low tide, but there was a set of waves that kept coming in about every 15 minutes that would go over the top, so I had to quickly move when one was spotted :shock: :shock:
INCOMING!!
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That one didn't get me, but another one later on got my shoes soaked :cry: :cry: :oops:

Still was a nice morning,

Comments appreciated. Does the composition work, are they too dark??

thanks,

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Postby Marty on Sat May 20, 2006 11:58 pm

Great shots,
I like the second the best, would like to see just a little more detail in the shadows.
Well worth getting up at 5.00am
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Postby avkomp on Sun May 21, 2006 12:51 am

makes it worthwhile getting up for.

I prefer the viewpoint of the first but the extra shadow detail of the second

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Postby stubbsy on Sun May 21, 2006 11:38 am

André

The first & 3rd are my pick here. The imposing foreground posts distract me too much from the image in #2. These also seem a bit too blue to me.

I'm also impressed by your bravery. Getting around on the slippery edge to where you've taken the last 3 shots would be tricky and you'd want very dependable shoes!
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Postby radar on Sun May 21, 2006 6:40 pm

Thanks for the comments, much appreciated.

Marty and Steve, I've got a few more like the second, I'll see if I can get a bit more detail.

Peter, the light was changing a fair bit over the period that I was there, Auto WB was used, but I see what you mean, I'll tone down some of the blue and see what comes out. As for being slippery, it was :? I had to be extra careful when I had to move back to a safe elevetated rock. That safe rock was very rough, so it gave me good grip.

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