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Postby yeocsa on Sat May 27, 2006 10:08 pm

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Postby Alex on Sat May 27, 2006 10:14 pm

Nice, Arthur. Where was this taken, Singapore?

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Postby owen on Sat May 27, 2006 11:42 pm

Hi Arthur. I will be honest with you, I find the background REALLY distracting in this shot. I like how you have fit her in the frame and her pose, but the background does ruin it for me.

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Postby Nnnnsic on Sun May 28, 2006 1:13 am

I agree with Owen here.

I like the shot but the background seems to be a bit of a downer.
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Postby yeocsa on Sun May 28, 2006 9:28 pm

Dear owen and Nnnnsic,

Thanks. I fully agree with your comments. I got to the location late. There were hardy any space for me. Furthermore, i had only a 28 - 70 zoom lens with me and had to make the best of the situation. I had fun. The overhead light from the roof was a great help.

Dear Alex,

The location is in Singapore - Raffles City Shopping Centre.

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Postby owen on Mon May 29, 2006 8:56 am

I'm not sure how good your PP skills are arthur, but if you could really blur the background, I think that would help a great deal.

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