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Hair 85mm f1.4

Postby wendellt on Mon Jun 12, 2006 4:10 am

i shot at hair expo this long weekend
it's like fashion week for the hair industry only 3 days though
but the sheer creativity that goes into the hair design and shows is amazing
image making potential was just endless

i shot these backstage where the light was absolutely gorgeous

85mm f1.4
1/80 f1.4 ISO800 custom white balance

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this one was shot at f2.8
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now if Nikon only made a 17-80 f1.2 then that would be heaven
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Postby Bodak on Mon Jun 12, 2006 8:45 am

Great images and well captured.

#3 captures my attention the most out of these and I'm trying to work out why, maybe there is almost a wax works museum quality to the image.
A very interesting image IMHO, I like it a lot..

I have to say that in looking at these images I'm glad to be a bloke of 55 with short back n sides, low maintenance.
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Postby Raskill on Mon Jun 12, 2006 8:50 am

Wendel,

Great pics mate, excellent lighting, good looking women and nice staturation/contrast. Your usual quality. :)

Once again, having to photography beautiful women must be really tiring... :wink:
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Postby marcotrov on Mon Jun 12, 2006 9:06 am

Lovely images Wendell. the soft lighting has really enhanced these shots.
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Postby Heath Bennett on Mon Jun 12, 2006 9:42 am

Perfect. Fantastic shots, and great lighting. The thing that stands out to me most is the tonality and colour balance. Awesome.
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Postby Slider on Mon Jun 12, 2006 10:03 am

Top stuff Wendell. :D I love the 3rd in particular. Brilliant lighting and composition.
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Postby sirhc55 on Mon Jun 12, 2006 11:08 am

You are the man Wendell - beautiful shots in every way
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Postby terminator on Mon Jun 12, 2006 11:19 am

Very nice captures.
What method did you use for Custom white balance.
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Postby antman on Mon Jun 12, 2006 11:28 am

Very nice Wendell.

No.3 is great.
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Postby shutterbug on Mon Jun 12, 2006 11:28 am

Great available light capture, I love them all.
Now you can through away those speedlights :wink:
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Postby wendellt on Mon Jun 12, 2006 11:42 am

thankjs everyone

i love the tonality as well very nostalgic looks like they were taken at paris fashion week or something like that

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white balance from 3200 to 5600 k, somehow i got a little green tinge because of the mixture of irradescent and fluro lighting backstage
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Postby Geoff on Mon Jun 12, 2006 12:06 pm

Beautiful work yet again Wendell, nicely done!! :D
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Postby beetleboy on Mon Jun 12, 2006 1:46 pm

Again, great work Wendell.

As much as I love your "lit" images - your use of available light here is very effective and well controlled. Good work.
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Postby rokkstar on Mon Jun 12, 2006 2:31 pm

Wendell, these are excellent.
The lighting is so beautifully soft.
My favourite is the "caught in the act" number 3.
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Postby Matt. K on Mon Jun 12, 2006 4:55 pm

Wendell
Your first image is truely beautiful as a portrait. It looks like the painting of a master. Well done! Get it printed and framed. It's images like this that keep me inspired to do better.
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Postby Jeko70 on Mon Jun 12, 2006 5:31 pm

Excellent work!
I like #1, just awesome.
Beautiful light and all well exposed.

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Postby Grev on Tue Jun 13, 2006 1:08 am

I really like the first 2. Great ambient lighting portraits.
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Postby PiroStitch on Tue Jun 13, 2006 2:54 am

Love the colours and lighting with all the photos.
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Postby Alex on Tue Jun 13, 2006 9:49 am

Wendell,

Excellent photos, all of them.

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