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Postby stubbsy on Sat Jun 17, 2006 7:31 pm

One of my personal little rules is NOT to do those arty farty colour in a black and white shot.

You know the sort - black and white shot of someone holding a red, red rose and the rose is petals are coloured.

My vow to myself is not to do such cliched shots

NEVER

EVER


Until now.

Does this work, or should I have stuck with my rule?


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Postby birddog114 on Sat Jun 17, 2006 7:36 pm

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Postby macka on Sat Jun 17, 2006 7:36 pm

I like it, but then, I do not have an automatic hatred of selective colour. I tried one recently, but it didn't work out anywhere near as well as this.
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Postby shakey on Sat Jun 17, 2006 7:57 pm

Certainly looks a colourful character. The screendoor in the background is tragic. I'd transport him to a Greek Isle with whitewashed walls and some colourful flowers in window boxes in the background (and keep the whole thing in colour).

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Postby Suri on Sat Jun 17, 2006 8:40 pm

Have to agree with Shakey here.
Too bad about the screen door!!
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sat Jun 17, 2006 8:57 pm

Shakey's got a good idea do a MattK extraction of the colourful Peter and then find some more interesting background to sit him infront of :)

For what it's worth I agree the screen door kind of kills it for me.
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Postby Nnnnsic on Sat Jun 17, 2006 9:02 pm

I don't think it works.

It's not arty... it's just blah.
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Postby birddog114 on Sat Jun 17, 2006 9:07 pm

Nnnnsic wrote:I don't think it works.

It's not arty... it's just blah.


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Postby stubbsy on Sat Jun 17, 2006 9:07 pm

OK - Screen door gone, coloured and B & W backgrounds now. Better?

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Postby birddog114 on Sat Jun 17, 2006 9:09 pm

stubbsy wrote:OK - Screen door gone, coloured background. Better?


NO! coloured background is too heavy!

O/T:
I thought you're gone for dinner with friends :?:
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Postby stubbsy on Sat Jun 17, 2006 9:21 pm

birddog114 wrote:
stubbsy wrote:OK - Screen door gone, coloured background. Better?


NO! coloured background is too heavy!

O/T:
I thought you're gone for dinner with friends :?:

Image replaced by one with a lighter background (which BTW is the original background with a slight desat and hue shift. The wall was painted with the same paint as the chair!)

Re: O/T - Friend's mum in hopsital - dined alone :cry:
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Postby Dug on Sat Jun 17, 2006 9:35 pm

Christine Keeler it's not!
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Postby stubbsy on Sat Jun 17, 2006 9:37 pm

Dug wrote:Christine Keeler it's not!

First thing I thought of when he posed for the shot. Mentioned this to Leigh (nnnnsic) who didn't know what I was talking about so I had to show him the pic. And he went to art school :shock: I must be getting old :roll:
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Postby macka on Sat Jun 17, 2006 9:40 pm

Definately looks better without the screen door.

After seeing the coloured background I think I prefer it after all. I still don't hate the grey though.
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Postby big pix on Sat Jun 17, 2006 9:47 pm

for selective colour this is a nice image..... but....... I find that it could have been shot aganist the plain grey background...... as there is too much colour for a selective colour image...... colour the chair and the colours in the garment and you have selective colour, leave the rest as B&W........

for me just too much colour.......
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Postby Big Red on Sat Jun 17, 2006 11:16 pm

for me it needs a more detailed B&W background as its just too plain.
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Postby greencardigan on Mon Jun 19, 2006 10:05 am

The selective colour treatment works well on occasions. Looks good here.
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Postby Sheila Smart on Mon Jun 19, 2006 2:43 pm

stubbsy wrote:
Dug wrote:Christine Keeler it's not!

First thing I thought of when he posed for the shot. Mentioned this to Leigh (nnnnsic) who didn't know what I was talking about so I had to show him the pic. And he went to art school :shock: I must be getting old :roll:


I have a signed (Lewis Morley) copy of the famous Keeler snap. Might be worth something one day! Morley was visiting Sydney a few years back and was flogging off signed copies.

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