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Postby SteveGriffin on Thu Jun 29, 2006 9:46 pm

I decided to have a go at hard lighting effects with a black plastic snoot on the SB-800. C&C welcome

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Postby Laurie on Thu Jun 29, 2006 10:03 pm

very very nice shot. would make a very nice wallpaper.
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Postby DJXtreme on Thu Jun 29, 2006 10:11 pm

great picture. really like the effect that you've achieved here.
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Postby daniel_r on Thu Jun 29, 2006 10:19 pm

I like what you've done with this Steve. You've created a very clean and simple image that is visually effective.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Thu Jun 29, 2006 10:25 pm

I like it , simple and effective the only niggle is the little reflection the the coffee's surface far right.
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Postby blacknstormy on Thu Jun 29, 2006 10:38 pm

Love it Steve - simple and very very effective :)
mmmmm........
need to play with some 'dark light' ;)
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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Jun 29, 2006 11:47 pm

This shot is excellent and would lend itself to a Bauhaus style coffee shop - superb
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Postby Steffen on Thu Jun 29, 2006 11:53 pm

Beautiful, like graphic art. Might be a bit tricky to print, though :wink:

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Postby Nnnnsic on Fri Jun 30, 2006 2:08 am

I like this image (and not just because I'm directing a play of the same name).
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Postby Grev on Fri Jun 30, 2006 3:25 am

Very nice manipulation of light.
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Postby admajic on Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:50 am

Excellent work. All you need is some steam rising and we can smell it :)
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Postby SteveGriffin on Fri Jun 30, 2006 12:55 pm

Thanks for all of the positive comments. It is really satisfying to snap a shot that someone else likes :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Postby wendellt on Fri Jun 30, 2006 1:40 pm

ah a fellow snoot user

minimalist and beautiful
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Postby terminaltackle on Fri Jun 30, 2006 11:01 pm

That is a great shot, did you nail the effect you were chasing?

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Postby 99 on Fri Jun 30, 2006 11:10 pm

Pardon my ignorance (begginerism) but what is a snoot? BTW I like the photo.
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Postby Willy wombat on Sat Jul 01, 2006 12:58 am

I will add my voice to the guys who have commented on the ffectiveness of the simplicity. Well done. I would love more info on this shot and how it was achieved.

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