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Curved stairwell and golden building

Postby Willy wombat on Tue Jul 18, 2006 12:37 am

I like these two from my morning walk.

Im new to architecture photography, but dropped into the Harry Seidler Exhibition at customs house and was inspired by the beautiful shots.

[img]http://www.fototime.com/{7521497B-54A3-4155-BBF1-7BD47D27698D}/picture.JPG[/img]
This one was inside the Customs House

and

[img]http://www.fototime.com/{A0FBF431-363C-4F10-B240-4F40C379D33C}/picture.JPG[/img]
This one was a few doors up the street


Please let me know any tips to improve. Cheers
WW
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Postby ozczecho on Tue Jul 18, 2006 12:47 am

WW, not sure how to help you....IMHO they are both great pics...well done. Love the perspective of the 2nd one....you made an ordinary building look great....
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Postby Willy wombat on Tue Jul 18, 2006 1:00 am

Thanks OZ

Nice to know you liked them.
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Postby Steffen on Tue Jul 18, 2006 1:54 am

I think the first shot is phantastic. Period.

The second one is quite appealing, but unsatisfying at the same time. This is because it is set up to be a symmetical shot, and for that you would have had to stand a few steps to the left. The amount of asymmetry present in the image doesn't add to it, IMHO. The colours and perspective are very good, nevertheless.

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