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by wendellt on Sun Jul 23, 2006 5:30 am
some more backstage portraits from a fashion show
my usual off camera flash coupled with cleanup in photoshop
notice the slight motion blur
i got that by using a much slower shutterpeed that would expose a little for the ambient light in the background and used rear sync flash to capture the model, inadvertantly the slow shutterspeed captures camera shake and is rendered as artistic blur.
Erika Heynatz
the rest can be found here
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by kipper on Sun Jul 23, 2006 6:04 am
Absolutely fantastic Wendell. You've aged like a good wine.
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by gstark on Sun Jul 23, 2006 11:17 am
Wendell,
You're certainly starting to get there.
The second and third of these are excellent.
In the second, while the lighting is still a tad too harsh - look at the shadows from the model's left arm and on her neck - the shaping that you have applied to this image is verging upon stellar. You weren't using the softbox for this, and it suffers ever so slightly as a result.
In the third, the lighting is such that is has highlighted the texture of the model's skin beautifully. While I'd prefer that the model's eyes be looking at the camera, that they're not is not a major issue. My only minor niggle is that perhaps you could coax a little more highlight detail from the area around the model's nose where it meets her eye?
Well done.
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by beetleboy on Sun Jul 23, 2006 12:34 pm
Nice work Wendell..
2 and 4 do it for me. The only thing in no.2 that bugs me is the little "hitler" moustache created by the shadow of her nose!! Not sure how you could deal with that without an extra hand for a reflector tho!
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by marcotrov on Sun Jul 23, 2006 1:34 pm
#3 and #4 are stunning Wendell. Beautifully captured they both convey real feeling/attitude.
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by elffinarts on Sun Jul 23, 2006 5:25 pm
hey mate, the dynamics of the first makes it my fav. I shot for the first time last night in a long time without using my inflatable speedlight diffuser backstage after a gig and I sorely missed it for the harsher light the speedlight gave.
do you shoot with the speedlight at arms length or on a tripod or on a bracket?
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by bindiblue on Sun Jul 23, 2006 5:57 pm
What great shots wendell, I love them all,
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by wendellt on Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:16 pm
elffinarts wrote:hey mate, the dynamics of the first makes it my fav. I shot for the first time last night in a long time without using my inflatable speedlight diffuser backstage after a gig and I sorely missed it for the harsher light the speedlight gave.
do you shoot with the speedlight at arms length or on a tripod or on a bracket?
hi
thanks people
gary agreed i should of difussed one he second portrait, models features are too strong
mark i hold the sb800 at arms length that's about 1 meter away from the model
always shoot at 28mm with the 28-70
if i had someone to hold the flash further away i could take a full length shot with marginal light falloff with tweaked settings
i like tyhe 1st one most it has a great 1920's feel to it due to the fashion, i love that period
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by Alex on Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:18 pm
Hi Wendell,
Another set of great photos. Well done! Keep 'em coming.
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by Matt. K on Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:29 pm
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You just get better and better!
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by Geoff on Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:39 pm
Wendell - you're a freakin legend matey! As Matt K has put it so well, you are indeed improving every time u post here...it's a viewing pleasure to read/see your posts. Well done and keep em coming buddy.
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by Willy wombat on Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:46 pm
Inspiring and beautiful images Wendle.
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by ozimax on Sun Jul 23, 2006 10:05 pm
Outstanding shots here Wendell, very nice indeed, I think these are as good as any, Max
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by Heath Bennett on Sun Jul 23, 2006 10:07 pm
awesome mate - constantly getting killer pics.
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by Paul on Sun Jul 23, 2006 10:30 pm
Great shots Wendell! hard for me to fault any of these shots.. sensational 
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by mic on Tue Jul 25, 2006 12:18 am
Wendelt,
What can I say mate, what can I say
Well done !
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by ABG on Tue Jul 25, 2006 10:25 am
Lovely series of images Wendell. #3 is simply brilliant.
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by Oscar on Tue Jul 25, 2006 10:45 am
Hi Wendell, Great shots.
I prefer the 3rd shot the most but I would have preferred to see the models complete head.
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