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by rokkstar on Sat Aug 12, 2006 9:45 pm
I was in town today and stumbled upon an Antiwar march.
Fantastic it was - I got right in there and shot like crazy.
What struck me the most was the fact that very young children were marching alongside the adults, carrying antiwar posters with antiwar slogans. I'm sure not all of them knew what their anger was directed at but it didn't stop them chanting and marching and giving their voice.
Anyway, I would appreciate your C&C on these. This lot is purposefully hglighting the children and their posters.
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by MATT on Sat Aug 12, 2006 10:30 pm
rokkstar wrote:What struck me the most was the fact that very young children were marching alongside the adults, carrying antiwar posters with antiwar slogans. I'm sure not all of them knew what their anger was directed at but it didn't stop them chanting and marching and giving their voice.
Cheers
This is part of the problem I think, so ingrained from such a young age..
But I realy like the last pic.
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by Matt. K on Sat Aug 12, 2006 10:40 pm
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by pippin88 on Sat Aug 12, 2006 11:28 pm
All great, but especially the 2nd and the last one.
I like that in the last one, the kid wearing camo is walking in the opposite direction to the people in the background.
Also, the sweep and shape of the flag.
Would have been nice if the guy next to him didn't make it in frame.
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by wendellt on Sun Aug 13, 2006 9:53 am
2nd one is proably the best one, it has a deep connection to it
an anti war protest is one of the best subjects for reportage
lots of real emotin and meaning in there
glad you got to experience one
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by gstark on Sun Aug 13, 2006 10:02 am
MATT wrote:rokkstar wrote:What struck me the most was the fact that very young children were marching alongside the adults, carrying antiwar posters with antiwar slogans. I'm sure not all of them knew what their anger was directed at but it didn't stop them chanting and marching and giving their voice.
Cheers
This is part of the problem I think, so ingrained from such a young age..
One of the issues I have with this is why is this child, in #4, dressed in military clothing? Wasn't this supposed to be an anti-war protest?
Why do I get the feeling that I'm seeing a mixed message here?
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by sirhc55 on Sun Aug 13, 2006 10:35 am
wendellt wrote:2nd one is proably the best one, it has a deep connection to it
an anti war protest is one of the best subjects for reportage lots of real emotin and meaning in there glad you got to experience one
Wendell - children in war zones certainly know what war is about but the children in these photos are just pawns for over zealous parents 
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by rokkstar on Sun Aug 13, 2006 11:06 am
gstark wrote:One of the issues I have with this is why is this child, in #4, dressed in military clothing? Wasn't this supposed to be an anti-war protest?
Why do I get the feeling that I'm seeing a mixed message here?
This perplexed me too. I mean I've seen parents walk along with their kids at a march, but the kids were usually uninterested, bored, and had no active part in the demonstration - they were just there as the parents couldn't find a babysitter.
But contrast that with the look on this kids face on the right here - he was screaming at the top of his voice:

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by gstark on Sun Aug 13, 2006 11:11 am
MAtt,
And in a Bulldogs outfit too?
Hmmmm ....
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by mark on Sun Aug 13, 2006 11:46 am
rokkstar wrote: <snip> But contrast that with the look on this kids face on the right here - he was screaming at the top of his voice: 
That's a great capture Matt. Well done!
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by spada on Sun Aug 13, 2006 11:48 am
Hi Matt
In my opinion children should not be connected to adult world , particular to those killing field of war, they should stay with their innocent wolrd.Anyway pictures show very clear of the meaning.
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by SteveGriffin on Sun Aug 13, 2006 12:03 pm
Moving images Matt.
There was also a march in Brisvegas but as we were on the Hunt and Shoot we were only allowed 2 shots.
I think that much of the problem in that part of the world is that the kids are indoctrinated with the hatred as babies and live it throughout their lives. We are so lucky in Australia that for the most part conflicts are resolved without bloodshed and that most of us are more than happy to move on.
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by Manta on Sun Aug 13, 2006 12:31 pm
spada wrote:Hi Matt they should stay with their innocent world.
...as long as they are 'allowed' to. That way they might just bring some of that innocence, trust, respect and unconditional friendship with them as they grow into our future leaders.
Hatred, intolerance and bigotry are not genetic but are learned from those who have influence over the young.
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by spada on Sun Aug 13, 2006 6:17 pm
Manta wrote: Hatred, intolerance and bigotry are not genetic but are learned from those who have influence over the young.
That is true . 
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by Pa on Sun Aug 13, 2006 6:43 pm
rokkstar wrote
But contrast that with the look on this kids face on the right here - he was screaming at the top of his voice:
what gets me is the anger i see in his face. i'm afraid he probably learnt it here in australia, whitch is a shame.
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by moz on Sun Aug 13, 2006 9:12 pm
spada wrote:In my opinion children should not be connected to adult world , particular to those killing field of war, they should stay with their innocent wolrd.
I like that idea a lot.
Wars should not be held anywhere that children live.
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by gstark on Sun Aug 13, 2006 9:21 pm
Moz,
Can we please take that concept to the next level?
War should not be held anywhere?
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by Steffen on Mon Aug 14, 2006 1:32 am
moz wrote:Wars should not be held
Period. It's that simple.
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by moz on Mon Aug 14, 2006 8:47 am
gstark wrote:War should not be held anywhere?
Unfortunately a lot of people, including most of the voters in the US, believe that military force is the best way to get what they want from other countries. I'm on an email list with some USniks and some of them make our right with media people seem quite restrained and reasonable, especially when it comes to people who have US oil in their countries.
So I fear that since war is an essential part of their approach to the rest of the world (half their economy is based on war), banning it is unlikely to work. As well, the US, Israel, France and Britain are all major arms exporters.... note their liberal application of vetos in the UN security council when their arms trade is threatened by immanent peacefulness.
In a way they're right - few people would reasonably conclude that it's ok for 6% of the population to consume 25% of the no-renewable resources and produce 28% of the pollution. And that's *just* the US. So "at gunpoint" becomes their default way of persuading people to let the current situation continue - why do you think world trade talks keep collapsing? Not everyone is as accepting of one-way trade deals as Australia is. And we all know how willing the US is to change "the american way of life". Just like little Johnny "I'd rather see Australia under water than under Kyoto".
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by gstark on Mon Aug 14, 2006 9:14 am
Moz,
You're overlooking a couple of important factors: most US citizens do not vote, and most US citizens are totally ignorant of anything that happoens beyond the US borders.
Having lived there for seven years, I have good first hand knowledge of this, and of the total absence of international coverage that the typical US citizen gets to see from the media they have available.
That said, this is not the thread for these issues to be discussed in. 
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by rokkstar on Mon Aug 14, 2006 10:12 am
gstark wrote:That said, this is not the thread for these issues to be discussed in. 
Gary, I'm actually quite enjoying the discourse. It's an intelligent subject and I'm glad that in some may my photos have helped bring it up.
Pure vanity you see 
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by gstark on Mon Aug 14, 2006 10:16 am
Matt,
Please read my words very carefully ... Note my use of the term this thread
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by MHD on Mon Aug 14, 2006 10:47 am
Yes that last one is sensational, in part due to the confusing message it sends...
I like the contrast, the subject, the child, who would look more in place in Lebanon or some other warzone (horrid, yes) contrasted with the city scape behind...
Very good
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by rokkstar on Mon Aug 14, 2006 11:42 am
Fair enough Gary, please let me say I meant no offence there.
I'm glad people like the shots and I must say it's certainly provoked some conversations. I was on the phone to my dad talking about this issue for an hour or so last night - he'd seen the shots too. I'm not saying they are fantastic images but they make me think (which is a break from the vast periods when I don't  )
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by gstark on Mon Aug 14, 2006 11:59 am
rokkstar wrote:Fair enough Gary, please let me say I meant no offence there.
None taken, Matt.
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