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My Debut Posting

Postby bonou2 on Tue Aug 15, 2006 10:29 am

Hi all,

Wow where has this forum been hiding. Has fantastic resources and awesome photos. Thought i would post my (fav 5 atm).

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Look forward to being a contirbutor and cruising through all your awesome photos!

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Postby marcotrov on Tue Aug 15, 2006 10:44 am

Welcome dan :) Great first post series. I particularly like the treatment, lighting and composition of the third. Excellent. Terrific use of lighting, DOF and creative composition. :)
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Postby Glen on Tue Aug 15, 2006 10:58 am

Welcome Dan, great photos. Was 3 photoshopped (or did the city move)?
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Aug 15, 2006 10:59 am

Welcome Dan and what a way to begin with some excellent pics - hope to see more soon :)
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Postby Geoff on Tue Aug 15, 2006 11:16 am

Hi Dan,
Nice intro to the forum from you!! Thanks for posting some images! What camera did you take these with? I like #3 the most. Could you please tell us where in Sydney you are from and just pop it in your profile too? Thanks mate! :)
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Postby MATT on Tue Aug 15, 2006 11:20 am

Glen wrote:Welcome Dan, great photos. Was 3 photoshopped (or did the city move)?


I'd like to know also, great image.

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Postby bonou2 on Tue Aug 15, 2006 11:33 am

Thanks all, Number three has had some (cosmetic surgery) :shock: . It was taken when i had my 350D which i got rid of (terrible camera) then purchased the NikonD70s which i fell in love with (although the romance is over as TODAY i am getting a D200) I live in Malabar here in the Eastern Suburbs of Sydney. I have started my own photography business (weddings, real estate commercial etc....) and love being behind the lens!! And sometimes in front of it as well! :lol:

Cheers all,

Have a wonderful day!

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Postby ozczecho on Tue Aug 15, 2006 12:21 pm

Hey Dan....welcome to the forum. Great selction of pics..#3 and #4 are my faves...love what you did with #3 just to make it a "little different"...and #4 has a lot of energy...great stuff...
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Postby hash77 on Tue Aug 15, 2006 12:54 pm

Welcome and top work. Like the harbour bridge photo, v. creative.

Great lighting on the b&W too!
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Postby gunn parker on Tue Aug 15, 2006 1:04 pm

Hi Dan
Number 5 for me, it's great
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Postby ABG on Tue Aug 15, 2006 2:23 pm

Hi Dan. Welcome to the forum.

Nice series of images you've posted there. I quite like 2, 4 & 5. Number 3 has had a bit much cosmetic surgery for my tastes :)
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Postby stormygirl on Tue Aug 15, 2006 2:59 pm

Hi Dan,

Welcome to the best place to learn anything about photography! Haven't I seen these images somewhere before?? :wink: .#5 Would have to be my pick, and I really like the PPing you've done to #4 as well.

Good luck with the D200 (nice to see you're staying with Nikon!).
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Postby Alex on Tue Aug 15, 2006 4:49 pm

Hi Dan,

Some fantastic shots there! Welcome to the forum.

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Postby asaroha on Tue Aug 15, 2006 8:49 pm

Hi Dan,

Welcome. 4 is my favourite, although 3 'wow'ed me first.
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Postby bonou2 on Tue Aug 15, 2006 9:55 pm

Thanks so much 4 the kind words! Here is one more i took yesterday during my first shoot with a model.

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Just got my D200 - cant wait to get out there!!

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