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A different angle

Postby APOLLO_CAT on Wed Nov 01, 2006 3:45 pm

I've always been told composition is my wek point, so i thought i'd do a little more thinking with the ither side of my brain.


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Postby NJ on Wed Nov 01, 2006 3:53 pm

i like it!
i like the way the tip of the OH is rippled by the street lamp, i like the silowhettes of the street lamps and also how they repeat themselves.
it seems a tad dark overall though. i think it could do with a bit of brightness and contrast adjustment.
might be my monitor.

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Postby drifter on Wed Nov 01, 2006 4:57 pm

The composition here is great .Its just the bottom half of the shot is a bit dark . Aside from that its really a neat idea .
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Postby Yi-P on Wed Nov 01, 2006 9:24 pm

That is a great idea! :)

A little crop out of the dark bottom will be great IMO
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Postby Ladybird on Wed Nov 01, 2006 9:29 pm

Agree with all the above...An innovative idea that has lots of merit but I do find the dark bottom detracts a bit from the overall feel of the shot.

You have a great eye for capturing shots that are a bit out of the square. Well done!
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Postby APOLLO_CAT on Wed Nov 01, 2006 9:48 pm

Appreciate all the positive and helpful comments, many thanks :)
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Postby marcotrov on Wed Nov 01, 2006 9:49 pm

Unusual perspective. Like the fishbowl effect.
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Postby Geoff on Wed Nov 01, 2006 11:04 pm

Very nice apollocat! This is truely a unique perspective that works well. Nicely executed.
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Postby ozczecho on Wed Nov 01, 2006 11:55 pm

Good one apollocat, like your different view..Nice use of DoF..agree with the others regarding the crop..
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Postby Underload on Thu Nov 02, 2006 12:55 am

Good one mate...quite different, which makes it a winner I reckon
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