South Easternish Coast of Australia

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South Easternish Coast of Australia

Postby ozonejunkie on Fri Nov 03, 2006 11:23 pm

Way back in June, I traveled from Canberra to Melbourne, in a somewhat non-direct way. Just thought I would share a few photos for critique from the trip:

Tathra:
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Sunrise at Mallacoota:
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Nowa Nowa Railway Bridge:
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For more see: http://photos.ozonejunkie.com/v/occasions/cbrmelb/

What would make these photos jump out at yet?

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Postby Yi-P on Fri Nov 03, 2006 11:30 pm

Really liked #2, but only pick is the branch sticking out from the top left :P
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Postby big pix on Sat Nov 04, 2006 9:53 am

A play with LAB colour will do the trick........great shots.....

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a lot of brightness has been lost going to smugmug....... but still a little brighter........

A play with curves or levels would be a good starting point if you do not know lab colour as this can get tricky. In levels and curves play with each colour channel
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Postby ozonejunkie on Sat Nov 04, 2006 11:40 am

Thanks for that BP. The last two of the three original photos I posted are the result of me having a play with LAB colour, it looks like I need a bit more practice though. :)

Anybody else have any thoughts?
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