Perth City Sunrise Pano

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Perth City Sunrise Pano

Postby MattyO on Sun Dec 10, 2006 10:30 am

Words cannot describe how chuffed i am with this shot. The final image is 4500x13000odd and is sharp as a tack all over! This shot made the early wake up worth it all. The early bird does get the worm!

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Postby BBJ on Sun Dec 10, 2006 10:38 am

Matty, bloody beautifull shot, makes it all worth that getting up early for well done. Get it printed stick on the wall.
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Postby blinkblink on Sun Dec 10, 2006 10:58 am

Excellent shot. Makes me a little home sick.
Well done.
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Postby Killakoala on Sun Dec 10, 2006 12:08 pm

As far as panos go, it is a very nice one.

My only concern with the image is the brightness of the sun/sky on the right hand side. Perhaps next time you could use a graduated neutral density filter to lessen the brightness without impacting on the foreground.

Still, i reckon it will look great printed. :)

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Postby adam on Sun Dec 10, 2006 2:24 pm

Beautiful!
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Postby antman on Sun Dec 10, 2006 4:25 pm

I'd be happy with that. Lovely.
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Postby NJ on Sun Dec 10, 2006 8:33 pm

very, very nice!

i love the colours, shame about the blown sky to the right though. that said i still agree with killakoala, it would look really great printed.
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Dec 10, 2006 8:59 pm

Matty

You should be justifiably proud of this. Yes the sky is blown on the right, but it's still a fantastic image. You should also be able to fix part of that blown sky in Photoshop with some selective use of the dodge tool and some Grad ND treatment in PSCS
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Postby obzelite on Mon Dec 11, 2006 12:33 am

i wouldn't mind printing that up and putting it in the shop as a demo of what our printer can do.

How does 4 meters long sound :)

Don't even know how you would go about block mounting it.
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Postby MattyO on Mon Dec 11, 2006 2:57 pm

Simon, that print 4 meters long would be about... 1.15metres tall

As soon as i can get some stock of some epson photo gloss or ilford smooth pearl paper i was going to print it out 300mm wide, which would end up about a bit over a metre long i think

The full image is 4734px by 16408px which is about 77 Megapixels. But if you want to print a big one, I can give you a cd with the photoshop file of the image. You can print it as long as you keep my name on it and you give me a copy :P

hahahah and if anyone wants a copy of it that big, you have to give me a part of the profits!

What sort of printer do you have at work? What is the maximum size roll paper you can use?
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Dec 11, 2006 3:15 pm

Great Pano there, and I'm not too much of a purist so the blown sky doesn't bother me. Well done, I imagine that took a while to stitch.
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Postby MattyO on Mon Dec 11, 2006 5:52 pm

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Just a bit of a remake, adjusted the shadows to bring the buildings out lighter, changed the blown highlight in the sky a little, and just a little contrast and saturation adjustment.

Also fixed some obvious stitchmarks
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Postby adam on Mon Dec 11, 2006 5:59 pm

Nicer!
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Postby obzelite on Tue Dec 12, 2006 1:07 am

MattyO wrote:
What sort of printer do you have at work? What is the maximum size roll paper you can use?


roland SP540, roll size is 1.37m x 50m, maximum print is 53inchs high.

its good for 1440 dpi, but profiles i have for the media we use only go to 1050. But thats still ok for the size i print stuff.
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Dec 12, 2006 9:36 am

Matty

That rework makes the image even better.
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Postby MHD on Tue Dec 12, 2006 9:48 am

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Postby MattyO on Wed Dec 13, 2006 7:15 pm

the very kind people at our printing store gave me a test sample of about 930mm of epson premium luster paper to have a trial with before we buy.

Ive printed this image out at 260x900 and it looks pretty farken good. The print barely fits in the bath and the photo doesn't really do it much justice so i wont bother posting it.
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Postby adam on Thu Dec 14, 2006 12:18 am

Fold it before putting it in the bath! :lol:

Would like to see this in person. Make sure you display it when you have an exhibition :)
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Postby seeto.centric on Sat Dec 16, 2006 1:15 am

wow.. im simply blown away by this!
just curious.. what did you use to produce such an image? ie. specialist equipment?

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Postby thelastname on Sat Dec 16, 2006 10:47 am

Fantastic shot, well done on a great job.
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Postby MattyO on Sat Dec 16, 2006 11:57 am

seeto.centric wrote:wow.. im simply blown away by this!
just curious.. what did you use to produce such an image? ie. specialist equipment?

-julz


nah mate. Just loaded the 70-200 onto my camera and mounted it on my tripod in portrait mode, and exposed the central part of the city, and then took shots going around.

Then just took the time and stitched it all together in photoshop. Its more time consuming than anything.
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