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ca1aismore practise at car photography. please let me know what you think. thanks for looking
![]() ![]() more pictures here: http://s33.photobucket.com/albums/d56/Nathanjacobs/nathans%20calais/ Nathan
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nice angle. I like the backdrop, and the way your angle of view is virtually under the car.
Perhaps move the P-Plate, and the copper ribbon from the antenna. Nice exposure.
I agree, a very nice angle. I would clone out the lights in the middle windows of the building
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thanks for the suggestions guys. i was thinking the same thing chris but wasnt sure to go ahead with it or not.
thanks again ![]() Nathan
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Nathan
The quality of your work is really coming along in leaps and bounds. Notwithstanding the valid critiques already made, this is a superb image. You've got a really strong composition, made very good use of an interesting, but not dominating backdrop and used a sublime mix of colours that enhances the viewers enjoyment of the image. Thanks for sharing this. Peter
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wow thanks stubbsy, that really means a lot to me! its all you guys that make myself push harder to achieve better results! so thanks again.
Nathan
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I think this image is excellent from an artistic viewpoint.
If, however, the objective was to showpoint the car, then I think the angle is too low. Great exposure level, and I agree about losing the lights. TFF (Trevor)
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thanks guys, yeah it is more of an artistic view rather than showing the whole car.
Nathan
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nice work with the editing as well
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I agree with what's been said so far. If I was to pick on something, I would have liked to see a little bit more of the window arches, at least enough not to crop the third one.
But that's really nit-picking. __________
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thanks piro, phillip and glen. much appreciated!
![]() ![]() phillip, here is one that shows more arches but isnt as strong of an image. btw nit-picking is good! ![]() Nathan
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Perfect background and beautiful light! The secret of good photography! I would be tempted to select the car....invert the selection and slightly desaturate the background and then put a little 'median' blur through it. I would then invert the selection again and give the car a very slight contrast pop using USM 20/40/0 and perhaps very slightly darken the car. I guess the only thing missing is a couple of red roses on the ground front left of the vehicle! Brilliant job!
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Matt. K
thanks guys!
zeddy, thats exactly what i thought! ![]() thanks for the tips matt, feel free to have a play around and post ur result. im not sure i would achieve the same result as u say, but if u were to show me what you have done it might make it easier for me to acheive it ![]() Nathan
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