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The River Torrens

Postby joey on Fri Dec 22, 2006 6:37 pm

The images were taken in Adelaide.

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Postby joey on Fri Dec 22, 2006 9:25 pm

Critique & Comments are welcomed! :)
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Postby Oscar on Fri Dec 22, 2006 9:55 pm

Nothing too much wrong with these shots Joey. Missed them earlier.

My picks would be #2 then #1.

On my monitor the reds do not seem to be as I would expect - other than that they seem fine.

Cheers, Mick :) :) :) BTW Welcome to the forum - just a little belatedly.
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Re: The River Torrens

Postby DanielA on Fri Dec 22, 2006 9:59 pm

Nice images.

The white balance looks a little on the cool side. The auto white balance seems to do that a bit.

The fountain looks a little cramped at the top of the frame. You could try giving it a bit more space there and take some from the water at the bottom.

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