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last nights storm

Postby colin_12 on Sat Jan 13, 2007 1:22 pm

Here is my first attempts at lightnig shots.
C&C please.
Regards Colin

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Last edited by colin_12 on Mon Jan 15, 2007 8:10 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Postby chet on Sat Jan 13, 2007 2:48 pm

first shot is unreal! :)

settings?
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Postby rooboy on Sat Jan 13, 2007 6:10 pm

Agreed, first shot is a fantastic capture. I'd be tempted to crop out the small bolt on the LHS, and do some curves work to try to bring out more of those amazing colours in the sky on the right.

I've never tried lightning shots, it must be worth the hard work when you get something like this :D
So join in the chorus, and sing it one and all!
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Postby daniel_r on Sat Jan 13, 2007 6:17 pm

I'm going to agree with Patrick, and also suggest maybe cloning out the whatever it is in the top left corner

... or even perhaps cropping the left of frame slightly to remove the object in the corner and the bolt. A simple hand-over-the-crop spot makes it look better to me.

Great shot otherwise, nice colour!
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Postby colin_12 on Sat Jan 13, 2007 7:40 pm

Hey all,

Chet, I was running 10 second exposure with 200 iso and f5.6 for the first image. The second image was at 20 seconds and caught three separate bolts.

Rooboy and Daniel, it took me about twenty goes to finally get a decent one. Ihave done a little to the exposure by darkening it a little. I have cropped out the left and it does look great, thanks.
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Postby garlino on Sun Jan 14, 2007 1:42 am

First shot is great. Nice work
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Postby colin_12 on Mon Jan 15, 2007 8:10 am

Here are some extras for those of you who wanted more colour and a crop.
Do you prefer reds or blues? I have a balanced effort I think works last.
C&C please. I dont have a decent photo editing package as yet. Soon.
Regards Colin

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Postby bwhinnen on Mon Jan 15, 2007 8:53 am

Last one for me Colin, although I feel it needs a bit more work that would be easy with PS. The crop works better than the original too.

You have a good keeper there though. The detail in the bolt is fantastic and the addition of the break in the clouds really make it a wonderful shot. I do like the lights in the distance too, it is as if the bolt was hunting down the only civilisation around!
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Re: last nights storm

Postby MATT on Mon Jan 15, 2007 9:56 am

colin_12 wrote:Here is my first attempts at lightnig shots.
C&C please.
Regards Colin


Very jealous of your first attempt. I prefer the blues in the second lot of PP'd ones

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